Talk:Lipstick and Dynamite, Piss and Vinegar: The First Ladies of Wrestling/GA1

GA Review
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Everything's looking really good at this point, and there are only a couple of little issues that need addressing: I think that's all, and sorry for being so picky about things! I guess you know you've got a week, you know how the system works (probably a lot better than I do!) and good luck :) — 97198   talk  13:20, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * By the 1940s, however, American men had to leave -- I think we can do away with the "however" because this isn't actually contrasting anything with the 30s, since it wasn't mentioned that men were, well, there.
 * ✅ Nikki  311  18:13, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * "Plot" implies fiction, so "Synopsis" may be a better heading.
 * ✅ Nikki  311  18:13, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * The film also covers their post-wrestling employment: lion-tamer, detective, nurse, and yodeler -- using the word "employment" we'd have lion-taming, yodeling, etc. so either change as necessary or use a word like "occupation" instead of employment.
 * ✅ Nikki  311  18:13, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * It had several other premieres -- these ones aren't really premieres, are they? Unless it's the Atlanta premiere or Chicago premiere, which is kind of lame. Is "screenings" a better word?
 * ✅ Nikki  311  18:13, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * The film premiered in 2004 at various film festivals across the United States -- Actually, I hear Canada's not actually one of the 50 states ;) It did have its world premiere in Canada, so perhaps add in that it first screened in Toronto.
 * ✅ lol. Nikki  311  18:13, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Is there a source for the New York Daily News comment?
 * ✅ - I have no idea where that came from and can't find it, so I removed it. Nikki  311  18:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Karie Bible of IGN called the film but Liz Braun of the Toronto Sun calls the film -- sweep through for tense consistency.
 * ✅ Nikki  311  18:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Link Rotten Tomatoes
 * ✅ Nikki  311  18:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * I assume Ebert's rating was out of 5, maybe add that in.
 * ✅ Nikki  311  18:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Link San Francisco Chronicle
 * ✅ Nikki  311  18:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Oh, and is there a source for the film often being referred to as just Lipstick and Dynamite? — 97198   talk  13:24, 27 July 2008 (UTC)
 * ✅ Nikki  311  18:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)

I think I got everything! Thanks for the review. Nikki 311  18:23, 27 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Awesome stuff, I'm happy to go ahead and pass it. — 97198   talk  07:17, 28 July 2008 (UTC)