Talk:Liquid cooling

Expanding the Article
I was tasked with expanding a Wikipedia article for a technical term as a school assignment. I chose to expand this article a bit more since it was short but fairly straightforward and easy to understand. I wanted to add a history section explaining the development, but my timeframe was limited and finding articles on specific applications was proving to be much easier.

I added a section under "Applications" for "Liquid cooling garments" and tried to give a brief overview of them. I also tried to make the additions fit with the existing sections.

That being said, I still think "development history" and "process explanation" would make good additions to the article. I hope I did alright. If you see any mistakes I made, please tell me. I welcome any constructive feedback. Thank you for your services of spreading accurate information.

Mmobrien1 (talk) 03:40, 16 July 2024 (UTC)