Talk:Lisa's Substitute/GA1

GA Review
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Looks pretty good so far. I only have a few suggestions: Otherwise, everything looks fine and should be able to pass if these concerns are taken care of. You have seven days to make changes, so good luck. — 97198 (talk) 08:41, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * her most positive grown-up role model - "adult role model"?
 * the Mike Nichols directed film The Graduate - an awkward phrase, so how about "Mike Nichols' film The Graduate"?
 * Homer explains to Lisa how he can not really understand - "cannot"
 * I think that a picture of Mike Reiss would be much more illustrative than one of Dustin Hoffman, considering Bergstrom's appearance was modeled on Reiss
 * they got Hoffman to re-record them - "they had Hoffman re-record them"
 * 1952 book Charlotte's Web - "novel" would be better than "book"
 * feature in the episode without getting sued - "without being sued"
 * you can see a list of tenants - never use second-person in an encyclopedia article! Instead say "a list of tenants can be seen".
 * I'm not sure File:Deweytruman12.jpg comes under fair use as it's not essential to accompany the content of the article. Simply a link to Dewey Defeats Truman somewhere would do, and I'm sure there are other free images that could be used instead (not that another is even necessary!).
 * Colin Jacobson seems to be getting some undue weight over the other critics - see WP:MOSTV and trim his comments down to the length given to other reviewers
 * positive reviews from people that work on the show - "from cast and crew members"
 * All done (I think). Thanks for the review! :)  The Le ft orium  09:40, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Nice work! I'll pass the article. — 97198 (talk) 14:19, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you!  The Le ft orium  16:21, 26 April 2009 (UTC)