Talk:Lisa Portes

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Please feel free to talk here before making any edits.01:55, 7 April 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aramos04 (talk • contribs)

There are several grammatical errors throughout and some run on sentences. (Especially in the lead - "Portes' parents", "... show it to her father, this is when she realized..." and "she would use her younger brother...")

In the Education section, you probably don't need the "very" before "very difficult time."

To make the works section more organized, you could split up the section by each work and talk a bit about each one (if you have enough information for this - if not, then you can disregard this)

Also, it would look more professional if you added titles to your citations.

Other than that, great job!!

-Maya — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mayasw (talk • contribs) 20:21, 19 April 2017 (UTC)
 * Did some major fixing. Fixed citations, tried to rely on more reliable sources. Couldn't find too much on each individual play but added festivals that she has been a part of.Aramos04 (talk) 05:36, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

Deleting the Template At the Top of the Page
Hi all, I think that there have been enough edits to sources, and the addition of more credible ones to this page that the template stating "this article needs additional citations for verification. Please help improve this article by adding citations to reliable sources" should be deleted. I still agree that there is too much of a dependence on primary sources, but I think there are more credible ones at least. I am going to delete the template but if there is any disagreement please comment here Aramos04 (talk) 06:53, 1 May 2017 (UTC)
 * I agree - I've removed it. Good job! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 03:13, 2 May 2017 (UTC)