Talk:Lisa Simpson/GA1

GA Review
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I really liked reviewing the Bart Simpson article, so I thought I'd have a go at this one, too. Here are some suggestions:

That's it! Another well written article. :) Nikki  311  21:07, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * "In "Lisa the Vegetarian", her increasing sense of moral righteousness regarding her vegetarianism leads her to proselytize, culminating in her disruption of a "meat-based" barbecue prepared by Homer, an act she comes to rue." - I know this isn't simple wikipedia, but I am not sure the average reader would know the meaning of some of these words.
 * Okay, I've simplified it.
 * The Wind in the Willows needs a season/episode cite
 * Actually, the Wind in the Willows is referring to the actual book, not an episode. I added the word novel in front of it.
 * including the most recent, The Simpsons Game - time dependent
 * Fixed.
 * Is there anything more reliable for the awards than the IMDB?
 * Yes, but I used IMDB because otherwise I would have to use a commentary or Newsbank, and I have always preferred to use online sources first. I've added a commentary ref.
 * Thanks for the review. -- Scorpion 0422  22:00, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok Great. Pass. Nikki  311  01:21, 3 November 2008 (UTC)