Talk:Lisa on Ice/GA1

GA Review
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 * "In order to pass and get the straight A grades she desires" I would change the verb "get" to one of a more specific meaning.

Other than a couple of minor changes, this is the only change I would suggest. I'll leave it up to you to change it, because it does at the moment still make sense - just I feel it would be better with a less vague verb. Otherwise, feel free to have a look at my changes and make any alterations you feel adequate.

In the long run, good luck with any future improvements with the article. It's another good read, well-structured and easily meets the GA criteria.


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Peanut4 (talk) 23:16, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Peanut4 (talk) 23:16, 6 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Peanut4 (talk) 23:16, 6 October 2008 (UTC)