Talk:List of Imortal episodes

Possibly the worst article I've ever read
I just copy edited this article and it is, frankly, horrendous. I've fixed the first season so that it at least reads correctly, but the section on season 2 is a total lost cause. I've boldly removed the vast majority of the plot summaries as, after reading the first 10 or so, it seems to me that the plot lines of any of the episodes from season two would (if summarised to a degree adequate for the purpose of a "brief plot outline") essentially be identical. The plot of this season seems so anaemic – it's basically a chronicle of some lame vampire-vs-werewolf war, poorly conceived and poorly executed – that I don't know if there's any way to construct an accurate summary, much less using reliable sources.

If it is possible to make this article acceptable then it's a job for someone who knows the area well, and who can also write in decent English and is committed to the use of reliable sources. That person is not me, as I fail on count 1. Since the content in its previous form was detrimental due to the horrific standard of writing it was presented in, and the fact that the improvement of this through copy editing is effectively impossible because of the reasons stated above, I have reluctantly removed the content until someone can make a good job of this. Please discuss. Basa lisk inspect damage ⁄berate  19:42, 11 November 2011 (UTC)