Talk:List of Seraph of the End chapters

copyedit
Hi, I've done copyedit on the article. I tried to smooth-out some of the phrasing in the plot, but I haven't read it myself (I've only watched two episodes of the anime). So most of my notes regard plot summaries: I've put this article on my watchlist and will try to be available for follow-up. Reidgreg (talk) 17:59, 5 November 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Not sure of the difference between Hīragi and Hiragi, that might need to be checked.
 * 2) From Vol 2 summary: "Shinoa makes Yu work together with Kimizuki. However, Yu convinces Kimizuki to visit his ill sister."  I don't understand the relationship between the two sentences and the intended meaning of "however".  That could benefit from some clarification.
 * 3) In the Vol 5 summary, "in order to test Yu's background". I'm not sure if that should be "test Yu's resolve" or something similar, again, not sure of the intended meaning.  Perhaps Yu is being interrogated?
 * 4) Lest Karr is mentioned once in vol 6 with not much context. If he's a significant character, a little more could be added to explain who he is.  If he isn't that notable, probably better not to name him and gloss-over that part.
 * 5) In Vol 8 summary, "After Kimizuki teases him with his sliced arm". I would tend to assume that Kimizuki is taunting Wesker after slicing Wesker's arm – but this is manga and something unexpected could be going on there.  I left it as-is.


 * Thanks for the copy-edit. However, I don't remember much about the manga. I'll try to address your concerns. I think you are correct about the last about Wesker's arm since the vampires can regenerate any wounds except for decapitations.Tintor2 (talk) 20:18, 5 November 2016 (UTC)

What happened?
The entire list is filled with premises written from quite a advertising way. I think I wouldn't be far from saying this page is filled now several copyright violations.Tintor2 (talk) 23:38, 1 May 2022 (UTC)