Talk:List of accolades received by Ra.One

Comments

 * What exactly is a "Hindu soundtrack"?
 * I'm sorry? There seems to be no mention of "Hindu soundtrack" in the article. ~*~AnkitBhatt~*~ 17:50, 4 July 2012 (UTC)


 * "pivotal roles" sounds rather awkward; why not "main roles"?
 * ✅ Made it "lead roles".


 * "Ra.One premiered in three cities across the world" - I think "across the world" is redundant, especially if you wrote in three cities and then list them
 * ✅ Removed


 * "nett revenue" should be "net revenue"
 * ✅ Removed from text.


 * "sustain " sounds for me too emotional
 * ✅ Re-phrased.


 * Be consistent whether you include the 0 ahead single numbers in dates

Overall I think it is ready for FLC. I am not a native English speaker, so I can't say exactly how the prose is. My impression of the prose was overall fine. Regards.-- GoP T C N 17:34, 4 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Thank you for this review. I would also request you to take a look at the FAC of the parent article. Regards, ~*~AnkitBhatt~*~ 17:50, 4 July 2012 (UTC)