Talk:Lithium (Nirvana song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 02:45, 31 January 2013 (UTC)

I'll be glad to take this review. In the next few days, I'll do a close readthrough, noting any issues here that I can't immediately fix, and then follow with the criteria checklist. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 02:45, 31 January 2013 (UTC)

Initial readthrough
This looks very strong on first pass: well-written, well-sourced, and covering the main aspects of the topic. Only one comment so far:


 * "Cobain blew his voice out" -- seems just a touch informal; might fall under an idiom to be rewritten per WP:WTA.
 * I skipped to the relevant portion on the documentary to review it and rephrased accordingly. Also added the modifier "According to Vig", because in the documentary he says "I think it was on 'Lithium' . . ." so wanted to indicated that it wasn't hard fact, just to the best of his recollection. WesleyDodds (talk) 04:42, 31 January 2013 (UTC)