Talk:Little Red Riding Hood (1997 film)

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Plot
I feel like the plot section is more analytical than explanatory, especially when it's mentioned that LRRH is "less than innocent." This section should strictly be directly related to the plot without inferences being added. Cstev5 (talk) 15:27, 15 March 2021 (UTC)Cstev5
 * I agree with this, we should explain the plot more in-depth so people who haven't seen it could picture it and understand what is going on during this film. Ldasi (talk) 15:42, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Black comedy is not really the style of this movie, also it has no sources to support it and it should be removed Hmess1 (talk) 14:44, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree and was just about to comment on that. If the style is deemed important for the article, it should be included in a different section, though, I don't know what that should be. Mvill6 (talk) 15:34, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * This ties into what I'm considering for editing, which is making a new section for Themes. The style of the movie is something that could be included in that section, since it pertains more to the elements of the movie rather than the plot Dayal34 (talk) 15:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Why was there a mention of the voice of the narrator when that has nothing to do with the plot itself? Aguil2 (talk)Aguil2
 * I agree with you that the mention of this does not contribute to the plot, at least how it is written in this article. However, the fact that the only speaking in this film is done by a narrator is important to the overall film itself. I believe this needs to be expressed more and maybe in a different way that way it doesn't throw readers off when viewing this article. Cferg33 (talk) 21:34, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I also agree that the narrator of the film isn't necessarily part of the plot. He is only sharing the words that they think but the emotion and actions can still be seen. I think that the sentence talking about the narrator could be moved out of the plot section and into the introduction of the page.--Poryfruit (talk) 15:51, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Why say she is warned by the cat when the cat is really speaking in a way that is difficult to understand what is said? Mihall5 (talk) 17:47, 15 September 2020 (UTC)
 * I agree! The addition of this information is a form of analysis, rather than a neutral summary. Lili813 (talk) 17:09, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

The plot gives a very vague description of the story, saying how the wolf ate the grandmother and Little Red escaped on time. Then, it outwardly states how Little Red is shown as not so innocent. There should be examples of the behavior of Little Red so that the reader could make their own claim on the behavior of Little Red. --AshleyM18 (talk) 17:24, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree with you completely! This article does very little in the in-depth descriptions and just gives a vague overview. I think it would be useful to go into more description of this story, talking about the meanings behind the way characters are portrayed, giving examples, and talking about why the creators chose to portray the story the way they did. There are so many versions of this story so it would be useful to readers to come and see the personal twists that each creator made in their version of the story and why they did that. Cferg33 (talk) 21:41, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

All the information has no citation--Ekrop1 (talk) 18:16, 21 February 2019 (UTC)

the plot section is written in a way that is confusing and not chronological. this should be fixed. it also doesn't make sense to bring up the huntsman in this section when it isn't relevant to the plot. this should be under a comparison section if deemed necessary to keep. Cquag1 (talk) 15:40, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree, Cquag1. I also found that there was a lot of analysis in the plot section that needs to be removed. -Mpavlik20 (talk) 17:08, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree Cquag1 I thought the plot section needs some revision. It seemed to include a viewpoint on Little Red Riding Hood's behavior and it was difficult to read at certain points.--Poryfruit (talk) 17:16, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree. If the plot was written in chronological order then it would make more sense. Removing unnecessary analysis will also help better understand the plot. Kmack3 (talk) 14:18, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ok I am going to remove the mention of the huntsman now Cquag1 (talk) 14:25, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The plot section does not necessarily need to be in order, because the plot section does not need to give a play-by-play recap, but chronological order could help the reader understand the flow. (Daniel Thompson326 (talk) 15:37, 15 March 2021 (UTC))
 * I think the plot section would be a little easier to understand if the sentences about Red Riding Hood surviving and her eating her grandmother's flesh were switched with each other. Or it could be left the way it is, with an edited last sentence. It seems like an abrupt topic change to go from the "happy ending" to her eating her grandmother. --Fgorm1 (talk) 15:51, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Why was there mention of LRRH being "less than innocent"? That sounds like it isn't entirely neutral, and could lead the reader to form a similar opinion to the writer when they might not have otherwise. Cstev5 (talk) 16:44, 17 February 2021 (UTC)Cstev5
 * I agree Cstev5 . I thought that there was some bias in this section of the article. I feel like this interpretation should be taken out of the article. Jciri3-19 (talk) 17:11, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I also agree Cstev5. I also thought this also may have happened a bit when it was mentioned that she was very clever. --Ndani06 (talk) 17:19, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I disagree Jciri3-19. I think that the lack of innocence is essential to the film. It does come across as interpretation, so potentially a new section describing reviews to the film could be added to include this information in a better way. Mpavlik20 (talk) 17:23, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * The Manual of Style page for Films suggests a possible Themes section. This could do for tracking the idea of innocence without placing it under the Plot. --End2657 (talk) 19:43, 17 February 2021 (UTC)

The sentence " She is thus portrayed, in another contrast to traditional depictions of the story, as being less than innocent" can be seen as an interpretation of a part of the film and not direct fact, this claim can make readers view the film differently, making the argument red is less innocent is an interpretive claim. Daniel Thompson326 (talk) 17:06, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree that this claim is more of an opinion than factual. The claim that she is portrayed as less than innocent should either be in a separate section for reviews of the film or left out completely.Rzell02 (talk) 04:52, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Should all of the cast be mentioned when their character is mentioned in this section? Mvill6 (talk) 17:11, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I asked this question before and have now realized there is not wikipedia pages for all the actors, so they couldn't be linked, but maybe they should still be mentioned? Mvill6 (talk) 15:40, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I saw your comment and I was going to agree with it, I think it would make much more sense if all of the actors were mentioned when their character came up, instead of just the wolf (and narrator). J.mer22 (talk) 15:46, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Actually, the actors shouldn't be mentioned at all in the plot section. The Manual for films considers it redundant to the cast section, so that's something we could simply remove from the plot section. Dayal34 (talk) 15:55, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

The hyperlink when you click on Timour Bourtasenkov's name is rather confusing. It brings you to a ballet company's website rather than to a page actually about him. Maybe this should be removed? Irhin1 (talk) 17:12, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree, the addition of this link to his name only gives context to his ballet company and not to him directly, it seems unnecessary. -J.mer22 (talk) 17:29, 17 February 2021 (UTC
 * Timour Bourtasenkov's link isn't the only one like this on the page, if you click huntsman it brings you to information about what type of character he is which really has nothing to do with the story. I think it should be like a hunter.
 * This link https://www.caryballet.com/biotimour-bourtasenkov.html gives more information about him. It talks more so about his dance career because that is what he primarily does. This could give readers background on who he is. Jciri3-19 (talk) 15:54, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

The introduction mentions that the film was based on the early versions of the fairy tale, specifically mentioning the Italian adaptation of the story. However, the short film is more directly inspired by the French story titled "The Grandmother". Instead of mentioning the Italian version, it would be more informative for the reader to mention the French version and describe what the film does differently from the original French story in the plot section of the article. Sbaek20 (talk) 17:13, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree that the mention is inaccurate. Since it is referenced in the lead, it should also be mentioned in another part of the article as well. The link associated with it is also broken, so, if the information is kept/adapted, a new source will be needed -- Lsand345 (talk) 15:26, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

There some spelling and grammar mistakes within the article such as the sentence "She is clever enough manage without being rescued" the article should be reread and grammatical errors should be corrected. Daniel Thompson326 (talk) 17:15, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree with this. This should have been proofread or they could have used an outside grammar checker.Jriger12 (talk) 03:29, 24 February 2021 (UTC)

It is possible to make a section describing only the plot and create another section for cinematography. According to the Manual of Style for film, plot summaries describe the important plot points of a film. Including details like the cinematography of the film is outside the range of this description. They do, however, fall under the Themes section. Dayal24 (talk) 17:21, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree with you completely! There definitely should be a separate section to talk about the cinematography of the film. There definitely is enough information to add that would create a whole section.Ckirb2 (talk) 02:55, 18 February 2021 (UTC)

Is it possible to describe the plot of the movie in a way that is not subjective but can also give a thorough examination of it? Mguil2 (talk) 14:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mguil2 (talk • contribs) 23:55, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree, I feel that the plot is now lacking some substance now. The bias about the plot is removed but the reader needs more information about the story.  What more can be added without being subjective? Lili813 (talk) 15:46, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

The sentence "The film bears similarities to some of the earliest versions of the fairytale, including the Italian "La finta nonna" (The False Grandmother). [2]" should be removed from the article. The second source is no longer available because the domain to the website has expired, and can not be used as a reference source. (Daniel Thompson326 (talk) 15:23, 15 March 2021 (UTC))

Historical Background- New section
This section would include and expand on information regarding the other versions of the folktale that the director and writers of the film chose to base the film from. Such information may include : -differences and similarities between renditions -authors/publishers of past versions -Sources of other renditions Joshn49 (talk) 15:44, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Good idea Joshn49. We would need to find published sources making those connections before adding them.Amateur0 0editor (talk) 16:37, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree with this. A lot of the information on this page like the references to the huntsman and The False Grandmother belong in a section involving the historical background of the fairy tale instead of being put inside the plot and lead section. --Fgorm1 (talk) 17:14, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
 * could this possibly be handled just by linking the more complete article on little red riding hood on Wikipedia? We don't want to recreate that article here necessarilyAmateur0 0editor (talk) 15:26, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Changing Hyperlinks
removing Timour Bourtasenkov's link because it doesn't provide any info to the citeJdore1 (talk) 14:11, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * His hyperlinks have been removed. Irhin1 (talk) 15:54, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Cast
I think adding new information (from good sources) to the sections about the actors. Perhaps more information on the characters they played as. I'm going to start searching for a source that provides information on the characters.Jriger12 (talk) 14:29, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree. What information do you think would be relevant enough to include?End2657 (talk) 15:36, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree as well. I think some key past roles would be relevant. For example, Christina Ricci played Wednesday Adams in the Adams Family (https://www.rottentomatoes.com/celebrity/christina_ricci). Mpavlik20 (talk) 15:41, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Her personal bio page mentions her role in darker stories, which is certainly relevant to this play if that is what you were looking to add. I also found some information on the background of Tim. End2657 (talk) 15:43, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Jciri3, if you would like to use your link, I seems like the same one I found yesterday and think it would be great for background on Timour. I was also thinking of adding information for the grandmother, as she is the other character without a hyperlink. End2657 (talk) 15:53, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * End2657, I agree with adding information on the characters who don't have a hyper link. How would you like to format it? A short paragraph below their name, or a few bullet points? Jciri3-19 (talk) 15:57, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I think that a short paragraph would work best. If you would like to add information about Timour, I could find something for Evelyn Solann End2657 (talk) 16:00, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * That's a good way to split up the work. If you need any help finding information, just let me know! When we finish we can look over each other's sections if you would like. This way we can still help each other. Jciri3-19 (talk) 16:04, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Director's History
I think we should add history about the Director's previous film mediums. This way readers can think of how his adaption was made and how this film stands in his history of film making.Mguil2 (talk) 14:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mguil2 (talk • contribs) 14:50, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Creating a new plot
Here's a new idea for the plot summary. I propose that since the film builds up to when the wolf eats Little Red Riding Hood's grandmother, then the plot should describe how the actors portray this. You could also add that the wolf is able to lure in Little Red Riding Hood but she catches on and thinks of a smart way to escape without being caught. The first line in the plot description about the film being black comedy can be removed. The closing sentence stating that she is not innocent can be changed, perhaps that she fails to realize what is actually happening. Please reply if you have an idea on things that should or should not be included. Kmack3 (talk) 14:58, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I like your idea about adding more information to the plot section and removing the sentence about black comedy. I do not; however, think the sentence about Little Red Riding Hood not being innocent needs to be removed. In the description of the film on Vimeo, it states that she is portrayed as a "no so innocent" Little Red Riding Hood. This film was also uploaded to Vimeo under the name David Kaplan, so the description seems to be reliable. Please let me know if you feel differently. Irhin1 (talk) 15:41, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I think that since this description of Little Red Riding Hood was included by David Kaplan himself when he uploaded the video, it's okay to keep it in the plot description because it's not a personal description/opinion. It may also be good to add to the themes section as well. Jcassone (talk) 00:20, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Jcassone I agree. I think since Kaplan mentions her lack of innocence I think that it is important to include. I also agree that it would be a good addition to the theme section. Mpavlik20 (talk) 15:26, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I wrote a new summary in my sandbox if you all would like to review it. I didn't add any mention of her loss of innocence because I think that'd be better for the themes section. Here's the summary: "The film opens with a black-and-white view of the tale's forest, and narrator Quentin Crisp is the only voice heard in the film. An androgynous anthropomorphized black wolf tries to trick Little Red Riding Hood. He successfully eats her grandmother, and then plans to eat her. She enters the house and finds the wolf in her grandmother's place, but she doesn't know that he's trying to trick her. Little Red Riding Hood is lied to and told to eat the grandmother's flesh and she does, even though the cat tells her not to. The wolf then attempts to eat her while they lie in bed together, but she tricks him and leaves the house. After a brief chase, she manages to escape and return home." Sbaek20 (talk) 15:55, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * This is a really good plot Sbaek20. It includes a lot of plot points not included in the original section while also being short and to the point. I think the current plot should be replaced with this one. --Fgorm1 (talk) 16:10, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Images and Media
I believe we should add images of the characters within the film to give the readers an understanding of who and what are we talking about. This includes images of Little Red, the wolf, the cat, and the grandmother. AshleyM18 (talk) 15:52, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I think this is a great idea. Images could really add to this page and make it a lot more interesting to readers. Irhin1 (talk) 16:02, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes, good idea! Adding images to wikipedia can be a little tricky. There's a training on it that I'd recommend you complete before trying to find images https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students/images-and-media Amateur0 0editor (talk) 16:12, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Themes
I think we should add a themes section which covers the themes of the films based on other reliable sources' analysis of the film. The source https://www-jstor-org.unh-proxy01.newhaven.edu/stable/10.13110/marvelstales.29.1.0087 mentions the possibility of queer themes in the film, which I think we should mention in this article.Kbrad41 (talk) 17:26, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree with you that themes would be a good section to add. I plan tp look into some sources and then contribute to this section with you! Cferg33 (talk) 02:57, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Great! I'm going to add in the section and a few sentences on the themes of the film that were interpreted by Jennifer Orme based on the source mentioned above. I will also add in the source to the Notes section with the other references. Kbrad41 (talk) 14:13, 19 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception
for the awards section I found a source that lists more then just the three awards listed so I am looking into to it and finding the other awards to add Cquag1 (talk) 14:05, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I agree with this. I also found 2 awards that have not been listed. I will add them -- Lsand345 (talk) 15:51, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Including Innocence
I believe that the discussion or theme of innocence should be someone in the article, however, I do not think it belongs in the plot section. The plot section mainly is used to condense a large amount of info into an accessible form, it is not the place for interpretation such as if little red is more or less innocent. A section where themes could be tracked would be more appreciate for that idea. Daniel Thompson326 (talk) 15:50, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I think this makes a lot of sense. The idea that Little Red Riding Hood is not innocent in this version is a big part of what makes this film so unique so I definitely feel that it needs to be included in the article somewhere. I think adding a "Themes" section to this page could be a great idea, and adding in Vimeo as a reference allows the theme of innocence to be validated. Irhin1 (talk) 15:52, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Agreed, I think adding this under a theme section with the reference to the Vimeo video would a better fit for this tracking of innocence rather than introducing it into the plot section. Daniel Thompson326 (talk) 15:55, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I think that it should be briefly mentioned in the plot section as Kaplan mentions it in his description of the film on vimeo indicating that it is important. Her lack of innocence also affects many aspects of the plot. Mpavlik20 (talk) 15:56, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I am aware that some Wikipedia pages have analysis or critical analysis sections, maybe something like that would be appropriate. Daniel Thompson326 (talk) 16:02, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I think that it can be incorporated into the plot a bit without actually saying that she is less than innocent by just explaining the way that she is acting. Then when it is mentioned again in a theme section or another section, you can refer back to the plot. Ndani06 (talk) 16:14, 17 March 2021 (UTC)