Talk:Little Women (2019 film)/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Comment: Noticed that the last reviewer left without actually reviewing, so I'm going to try leaving most of my suggestions below. As of right now, this article is well-written and I believe it will become a good one real soon. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Per the film's billing block, I would remove all names in the infobox following Meryl Streep. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Those other names are in the billing block though. See the bottom of the poster. Rusted AutoParts  04:01, 15 November 2020 (UTC)


 * All references are archived so that's great. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Lead is already well-written. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Plot is already less than 700 words so that's that. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * As the article is written in American English, I suggest changing "theatre" to "theater" in the plot section. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 23:39, 14 November 2020 (UTC)


 * All images (other than the poster) are free to use so they pass. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * The last caption has a typo, so I would change "the Academy Award" to "the Academy Awards". Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * In the release section, change "released the first stills" to "released the first stills of the film". Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Also in the release section, I suggest adding the year to the last sentence that ends with "August 25". Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * In the "box office" section, I would change "finishing in fourth" to "finishing fourth". Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Following the fact that the film finished fourth, I would remove the Deadline Hollywood reference since it states the film earned $16.5 million in its first three days, contradicting Box Mojo and the article that state the film earned $16.8 million. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Also, I would add the fact that in its five days, the film finished fourth behind Frozen II. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 22:22, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Other than that, the article's "critical response", and "accolades" sections both pass.

Music
Other than all the suggestions above, I would advise moving the "music" sub-section under production into its own section per WP:FILMSCORE. Along with this, the Infobox album template should be added to the article, along with a tracklisting for the album (which can be found here). Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 23:18, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ I believe I've made all of the suggested changes. Please let me know if there are any others you believe would be appropriate! Thank you again, ! KyleJoan talk 03:16, 15 November 2020 (UTC)