Talk:Liu Bocheng

WP:MILHIST Assessment
A very cursory glance seems to indicate that the "Chinglish" style issues mentioned above have been fixed; this might however not be the case, and the article may need further copy-editing. Also, definitely definitely needs references. LordAmeth 09:18, 10 November 2006 (UTC)

Unfortunately it hasn't really been fixed. I cleaned up the "early life" section a bit, making it a little less awkward. The other problem is that a lot of it sounded pretty non-POV-neutral. I felt like reading a Chinese high school text on the glorious forefathers of the great people's democratic revolution...