Talk:Liv Flaherty/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:01, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 00:01, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good.
 * "write her" "wrote her"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "authority".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "on a soap opera" "in a soap opera" (might be WP:ENGVAR)
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Quotes in the lead are cited.

Casting and characterisation

 * Remove the comma after "her character".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Besides that, this section looks good.

Development

 * Remove the comma after "Sandra accepts".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Also remove the comma after "(Eden Taylor-Draper)".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "afore mentioned" "aforementioned"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "Aaron, and that both him" "Aaron and that both he"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * The phrase "she it would" in #Alcoholism_and_imprisonment sounds off.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "unaware who" "unaware of who"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "show him understanding" "show him the understanding"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * "worked with British" "worked with the British"
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Is there a word missing between "tells father" in the last section?
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove the comma after "wedding day to Mandy".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Remove the comma after "nominated again".
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Everything is well-sourced so this section looks good.
 * ✅ – DarkGlow • 14:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)