Talk:Live-In/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:08, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 20:08, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good.
 * Change "which CBS intended to draw" to either "which CBS created with the intention of drawing" or "which CBS hoped would draw".
 * Done

Premise and characters

 * No problems here.

Production

 * The reference right after "ELP Communications" is a citation to the first episode. This should be replaced with a secondary source.
 * It is sourced directly from the episode's credits, which is consistent with WP:PRIMARY. Kind of like how music credits are sourced directly from the liner notes using cite av media. I have watched the episode myself so I know these are true.


 * Same issue with the reference after "the Castle Bryant Johnsen-designed title sequence".
 * Same as above; there isn't any mention in a secondary source but it is given in the credits, so the episode is cited directly.


 * Remove the third reference after "Happy Together" per WP:OVERLINK and since it's a primary source.
 * The first two references there cite the fact it is a cover of "Happy Together"; Ray Colcord being the composer is only mentioned in the third reference, which is in the episode's credits.

Episodes

 * The notes after "Directed by" and "Written by" should look like notes (efns), and not like a reference.
 * Converted.


 * Additionally, the note near "May 8, 1989" should be lowercased per consistency with other articles.
 * Done.

Broadcast and cancellation

 * No problems here.

Critical reception

 * Since its a new section, the entire name David Bianculli should be present rather than just his last name.
 * Done.


 * The sentence "because the rest is trashy" is not in quotes or in the clipping, so I would reword or remove it since it doesn't have the tone usually present on Wikipedia.
 * It was an attempt at paraphrasing; removed.