Talk:Live at Benaroya Hall with the Seattle Symphony/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Review is complete. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  17:06, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Comments

 * Infobox: What genre(s) are found in the album. Remember to cite sources for the genre(s) in the body.
 * Added pop rock to the infobox and first paragraph of the Composition section, per Allmusic. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:03, 4 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Background: ...and the (symphony) charts don't change the songs... Use square brackets instead of normal parentheses.
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:47, 3 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Composition: Specify origin and profession of Buckmaster.
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:03, 4 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Composition: Per source, Feveyear also mixed and mastered the album, which is worth mentioning here.
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:03, 4 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Critical reception: but summarized his review with "Things aren't perfect; they're still beautiful." -> but summarized his review by saying that "Things aren't perfect; they're still beautiful." Flows better.
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:47, 3 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Track listing: Use the template to better organize the list into a table.
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:27, 3 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Track listing: What source did you find the track listing? Cite. Avoid using a source already used here to cite as it reduces reliability of the article info.
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:03, 4 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Personnel: Split into two columns: Use and  at the beginning and end (respectively) of the entire list, and  at the beginning of each column.
 * The section is already split into two columns, with the command to adjust depends on users' computer settings. I don't see how the forced split commands are an improvement to the article. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:47, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, a lot of articles force split. It avoids the need of scrolling down a page so much. However, since this isn't part of the criteria and it isn't that big of an issue, I can accept the way it is right now. — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  23:38, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I went with the "Div col" template, per WikiProject Albums | Article body | Personnel. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 01:47, 4 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Personnel: Where are these credits adapted from? Cite.
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 02:03, 4 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Chart performance: Put this info into a table for better accessibility. Rename heading to "Charts".
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:47, 3 August 2011 (UTC)

— WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  21:31, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking the time to offer feedback. More improvements to come. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 22:47, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * That's that. All issues have been addressed in less than 24 hours. Pass.
 * Again, thanks so much! -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 15:14, 4 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Np. :) — WP: PENGUIN  · [ TALK ]  15:21, 4 August 2011 (UTC)