Talk:Live at Leeds/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DreamRimmer (talk · contribs) 16:50, 4 October 2023 (UTC)


 * I'll review.  𝙳𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚁𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚛  𝚍𝚒𝚜𝚌𝚞𝚜𝚜  16:50, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

Lead

 * Replace "in" with "on" between "released" and "11 May" to correctly indicate the release date as "May 11, 1970.
 * Done the first, but not the second as that is American, not British English - see MOS:ENGVAR Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  16:17, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Background

 * This sentence is a bit fragmented. You can rephrase it like According to biographer Chris Charlesworth, "a sixth sense seemed to take over," leading them to achieve "a kind of rock nirvana that most bands can only dream about."
 * That doesn't seem to scan better to me.


 * Replace "were" with "was". Replace semicolon with "because". ...his main stage instrument because it allowed him to play...
 * No, that's American English, this article uses British English as it is about a British band see MOS:ENGVAR.


 * "group" is a collective noun, and it should be treated as singular, so "was" should be used instead of "were."
 * See MOS:ENGVAR again.


 * Please ensures that both actions (booking and becoming an assistant manager) are presented in a parallel structure. Rephrase it something like Simon Brogan booked and arranged the Leeds concert, and he later became an assistant manager on tour with Jethro Tull.
 * I don't know why this is an issue, the former scans better for me


 * Replace "just" with "only" for better readability. Also you can add more clarity by specifying what "LP" stands for.
 * Changed to something different.

Ritchie333 (talk) (cont)  16:20, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

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