Talk:Live at Third Man Records (Billie Eilish album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 13:58, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Short album article, though I will give it proper consideration nevertheless --K. Peake 13:58, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Add the venue parameter to infobox since this was a live recording
 * "is a vinyl-exclusive live album by" → "is the debut live album by"
 * The release sentence should be swapped with the recording one in the order
 * "It was recorded at an acoustic live show with her brother" → "The album was recorded during an acoustic live show with Eilish's brother" with the target
 * Remove wikilink on Third Man Records
 * "It was officially released as Eilish's first live album on" → "It was released by Third Man Records on"
 * "The record received a major drop on" → "Live at Third Man Records experienced a major release on"
 * "debuting at number 55 on the" → "debuting at number 55 on the US"
 * "selling 13 thousand copies in that week." → "selling 13,000 copies during that week."
 * Sure you can't add another sentence to the second para since it is too short?

Background and recording

 * "along with her brother Finneas O'Connell." → "alongside her brother Finneas O'Connell, known under his stage name of Finneas."
 * "She performed in front" → "For the show, she performed in front"
 * "several tracks off her EP" → "several tracks from her debut EP"
 * Add release year of Don't Smile at Me in brackets
 * "and her album When We Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go?." → "and her debut studio album When We All Fall Asleep, Where Do We Go? (2019)"
 * "The live album is a recording" → "Live at Third Man Records is a recording"
 * "then transitions into" → "then transitioned into"
 * "the shows "acoustic highlights"." → "the show's "acoustic highlights.""
 * "Eilish sings" → "Eilish then performed"
 * "the first chorus lyrics." → "the first chorus' lyrics." with the target
 * "Eilish continues the performance with" → "She continued the show with performances of"
 * "concludes the performance with" → "concluding by performing"
 * "Pointing to the live video feed of the recording process," → "In particular, she pointed to the live video feed of the recording process,"
 * "also thanked Jack White" → "also thanked White"
 * "Eilish mentioned," → "She further mentioned,"

Release and packaging

 * "The album was released independently under Third Man Records on" → "Live at Third Man Records was released independently by Third Man Records"
 * "2019 with limited release." → "2019, with a limited release."
 * "through two Third Man stores, each in Detroit and Nashville." → "at two Third Man stores, which were in Detroit and Nashville, respectively."
 * "On August 29, 2020, during" → "On August 29, 2020, coinciding"
 * "the record was made available" → "the album was made available"
 * "of the record appear on blue opaque vinyl" → "of Live at Third Man Records appear on blue opaque vinyl" with the target
 * "four repeated "Billie Eilish"'s in" → "four repeated displays of "Billie Eilish" in"
 * "of the record feature" → "of the album contain"
 * "applied by" → "that was applied by"

Reception

 * "described the album" → "described Live at Third Man Records as what"
 * "[performance]", and continues saying" → "[performance]," and continued by saying"
 * "He concludes with saying" → "He concluded by admitting that"
 * "described it as a" → "described the album as a"
 * "said it was" → "said it is a"
 * "The record received a" → "Live at Third Man Records received a"
 * Remove wikilink on Record Store Day
 * "sold 13 thousand copies in the sales week ending September 3." → "sold 13,000 copies in the US for the sales week ending September 3, 2020."
 * "at number 55 on the" → "at number 55 on the US"
 * "The record was the" → "The album was the"
 * "which was also the biggest" → "which itself was the biggest"

Track listing

 * A source is required to verify this is the track listing, plus can you find one to add the lengths of each live performance possibly?

Charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict
Kyle Peake, I cannot find a source anywhere where it shows the length. Not even the vinyl shows the lengths. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 01:21, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
 * but the track listing needs to be sourced more than anything else, or else I am not sure if this may be able to become a GA, sadly. Good luck though, I am glad to have been part of your ever-growing experience! --K. Peake 20:36, 24 October 2020 (UTC)
 * You need a source that verifies that being the track listing, even if the lengths are not provided. --K. Peake 07:22, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Kyle Peake, you can go ahead and fail the GA nomination. I am having some issues right now with some editors and I think they might complain about this becoming GA. Thanks a lot for all the reviews you have done for me. You are truly the best editor on this website. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 22:34, 30 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Are you sure about the fail since the track listing has now been proven it is able to be sourced? --K. Peake 07:44, 31 October 2020 (UTC)
 * Kyle Peake, yes I am sure. Bilorv is going to whine about this becoming GA. I just recommend you fail it so we don't have problem with them. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 20:58, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 * This is not an accurate characterisation of my position—see User talk:Bilorv for more information. — Bilorv ( talk ) 22:12, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 * I am not going to take sides between you and because I do not know about the issues, though I will ❌ this article per user request to be safe. --K. Peake 01:07, 4 November 2020 (UTC)