Talk:Livin' la Vida Loca/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:11, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:11, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * The non-free use rationales are all in great shape.
 * Add WP:ALT text and WP:UPRIGHT to every image.
 * "and is ranked [...] and is ranked" - kinda repetitive
 * Remove MOS:CONTRACTIONS (isn't, wasn't, etc.).
 * In the lead, remove the second link to Billboard (magazine).
 * Add a serial comma after Best Male Pop Vocal Performance (both times).
 * "awards shows" "award shows"
 * Add a comma after "first English album".
 * "rock–inspired" "rock-inspired" (WP:DASH)
 * Add a comma after "instead".
 * Wiklink bona fide.
 * Add a hyphen between "second best".
 * "respective nomination" "a respective nomination"
 * Add a serial comma after "Pop Airplay".
 * Add a comma after "however".
 * Add a MOS:GEOCOMMA after Los Angeles, California.
 * Add a MOS:DATECOMMA after March 25, 1999.
 * "similar the lyrics" "similar to the lyrics"
 * Remove the comma after "they kiss".
 * "gave it a performance" "performed" (less wordy)
 * Add serial commas after "55th", "2007, 2014", and Marc Anthony.
 * Add a comma after "another article".
 * Most sources are archived.
 * Sort categories in alphabetical order.
 * That's it from me. Great work!


 * Thank you so much for your comments, I followed all of them and fixed the issues you mentioned. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 16:06, 6 July 2021 (UTC)