Talk:Living for Love/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 08:15, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

Great! Thanks Calvin. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat  ] 08:27, 3 June 2015 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Calvin999 and I am reviewing this article.


 * Review
 * One dab link
 * NY Daily News says there's a connection issue, but works fine for me. There's a problem with the CNBC link. Radio airplay link isn't found


 * I'd put Interscope before Live Nation in the info box to make it alphabetical.
 * numerous versions composed → numerous remixes composed (?)
 * and piano, → Perhaps mention that Alicia Keys plays piano.
 * and have the lyrics as uplifting in nature, → and make the lyrics more uplifting
 * dressedlike → Typo
 * The storyline included mythology and showed Madonna as a matador, fighting her dancers dressedlike minotaurs in a red circular stage. It had numerous costume changes, → Present tense, it still available to watch as such.
 * "Living for Love" was additionally performed on Le Grand Journal and The Ellen DeGeneres Show. → I'd probably say "Alternate versions of..."
 * commented how she → commented on how she
 * The block quote shouldn't have a quotation mark at the end.
 * is an EDM house song → is an EDM and house song
 * 2014 and 2015 peaks are supposed to be placed in separate tables.
 * Ref 1: Billboard needs linking
 * Ref 3: Rolling Stone needs linking
 * Some refs have work and publisher, some just one or the other. I generally think that publisher parameters are not required anymore, so Apple Inc. and Hearst Magazine etc. can be removed.
 * Ref 10: Rolling Stone needs unlinking.
 * Ref 14: Digital Spy needs linking
 * Ref 22: Has double quotation marks in the title. Same for 57 and 95.
 * Ref 28: Time needs linking
 * Ref 95: Digital Spy should not be in italics
 * Ref 96 is overlinking BBC News as it is already linked in 58

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
 * Summary


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

On hold for 7 days. — Calvin999 08:49, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I did everything, except the dab, sadly I cannot open the dablinks url again, I don't know why these tools are not working on my laptop. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat  ] 10:23, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Neither can I. — Calvin999  10:43, 5 June 2015 (UTC)


 * Outcome
 * Pass or Fail:  — Calvin999  10:43, 5 June 2015 (UTC)