Talk:Living in the Age of Airplanes/GA1

GA Review
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Infobox, lead, summary
in the infobox.
 * Template:Infobox film recommends using " or " instead of
 * Is the note "Stylized in all caps" important/necessary? It appears the title just uses a font that looks like ALL CAPS.
 * "from April 8" – two options "from April 8 [to] [date]" or "on April 8"
 * "some felt it lacks" "some felt it lacked"
 * "The film won several awards" – you can just say three and that two were for the score.
 * "observes ancient humans walked" – word missing?
 * Airplanes... "it could fly" ... "it can also" "they could fly" ... "they can also"
 * "crucial to connect the world" "crucial to connecting the world"
 * Add an "a" before "bridge between cultures".
 * All ✅, the footnote's removed.  Gerald WL  14:57, 11 April 2022 (UTC)

Production, themes, release, reception

 * "There were four skeleton crew." "There were four skeleton crews."
 * "Terwilliger stated Waruszewski" "Terwilliger stated that Waruszewski" or "Terwilliger said Waruszewski"
 * "At certain scenes" "In certain scenes"
 * "were used used because IMAX" – double word
 * "reminiscent to" "reminiscent of"
 * "Hornerl" – name typo in #Post-production
 * "going on in out world" – might want to silently correct that typo for "our"
 * "Terwiliger" and "prised the premiere" – typos
 * "categorized a" "categorized as a"
 * ""accusing" travelers for" ""accusing" travelers of"
 * Add a comma after "Ronnie Scheib of Variety said".
 * "The film's aesthetics was" "The film's aesthetics were"
 * ✅ for all points, some resolved with alternative ways.  Gerald WL  06:24, 19 April 2022 (UTC)


 * References
 * Everything is sourced; great job. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:24, 18 April 2022 (UTC)