Talk:Llanishen Reservoir/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk)  23:44, 30 October 2010 (UTC)

Placing article on hold. Arsenikk (talk)  23:44, 30 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Comments:
 * Overall, the article has a lot of very short paragraphs, which breaks up the reading. For instance, the lead could easily be a single paragraph. ✅ I've condensed some of them inc. the lead - hopefully that's better
 * There is no need to reference information in the lead, where the references are repeated in the body (except highly controversial or counter-intuitive information). ✅
 * Is it correct that the reservoir was taken over five years before construction? ✅ not sure why that was there - the company was taken over prior to the construction of the reservoir
 * Parts of the history section are unreferenced, as are also other parts of the article. ✅
 * Please place the references after punctuation. (I've fixed those I found). ✅
 * Instead of saying "over 30 years", say "since [when]" (unless speaking of centuries or longer periods). Time passes quickly, and often Wikipedia articles are not updated in many years, alternatively they could be printed or exported. ✅ I can't find actual year, so gave decade
 * Spell out abbreviations on first use (such as SSSI and CCW). ✅
 * A gallery is not permitted. All the images are now available at commons:Category:Llanishen Reservoir. ✅ by reviewer


 * I have gone through all your comments, and fixed alot of what you said, I think ive added refs to any unreferenced statements on the whole. - Happy sailor  03:15, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good, but still need a ref for the Hain and Miliband. Arsenikk (talk)  10:19, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Roger, I'll dig one out here in a bit - Happy sailor 14:04, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
 * ✅ finally digged out a reference for Ed Miliband - Happy sailor 15:08, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Very good, congratulations with a good article. It is important to make sure all mention of living people is referenced, either on their bio page or otherwhere. Arsenikk (talk)  19:57, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Awesome, Thanks Arsenikk - Happy sailor 20:12, 31 October 2010 (UTC)