Talk:Lobero Theatre

Some information in the (public domain) article below may be of relevance to the Lobero Theatre entry. It requires careful editing for content and style to comply with Wikipedia's guidelines. I am employed with CAMA, which possesses some archival material related to the Lobero Theatre's early history, and seek the assistance of impartial third-party editors to extract relevant details from the below. Thank you. Justinrizzoweaver (talk) 21:07, 22 October 2013 (UTC)

The part I removed was a badly sourced irrelevant part. It was about half of the whole article, with a long list of sources that, in fact, bring you nowhere. When I did a more thorough search, I found that the piece was very close paraphrasing this. The Banner talk 01:10, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

Re: sources in the deleted segment: This text, mentioned by The Banner, is reproduced from A Tradition of Excellence: CAMA's History Book, 2013, Community Arts Music Association of Santa Barbara, Inc., pp. 4-23, hence its resemblance to the text referenced on that source. Most of the facts above are drawn from articles by Verne Linderman published in the Santa Barbara News-Press in 1947, reproduced with permission on the link provided. The archival references come from Community Arts Music Association's archives housed at CAMA's offices in Santa Barbara, CA. It is correct that much of the material is paraphrased and not all on-target for the Lobero Theatre entry. I suggest that with some editing, much of it is of historical interest and relevance to the Lobero Theatre entry on Wikipedia. Let me know what might be done specifically to improve its style and postability. Justinrizzoweaver (talk) 20:55, 24 October 2013 (UTC)