Talk:Lobet Gott in seinen Reichen, BWV 11/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 16:12, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

Always happy to review these. Give me three days or so.♦ Dr. Blofeld  16:13, 15 May 2015 (UTC)


 * History
 * "In the first complete edition of Bach's works, the Bach-Ausgabe of the Bach Gesellschaft, the work was included under the cantatas (hence its low BWV number)" -not quite sure why this gives it a low number? That paragraph does need to be sourced, either way.


 * That sentence is about the only thing left by the first editor(s) of this article. The edition assigned the BWV numbers - we can't say and source that in every Bach article. They thought it was a church cantata (1-199), otherwise they would have given numbered it with the oratorios Christmas 248, Easter 249. The numbering is inconsistent anyway but will stay ;) --GA
 * Yes, I know, it would be redundant to explain in every cantata article, but I wanted to know!♦ Dr. Blofeld  14:56, 16 May 2015 (UTC)


 * Scoring
 * "The work is festively scored, exactly like the Christmas Oratorio," -watch the punctuation here ;-)
 * Might not be clear to a non musician what (rec.) and (acc.) are. Again an unsourced paragraph—both that and the table needs to be sourced.
 * "common time (4/4)" -do we have an article on 4/4 time worth linking here?
 * We have the article on time, linked. --GA


 * Music
 * I thought you previously said it was exactly the same, now it's Part VI is similar?
 * The scoring is exactly the same, the structure is similar. --GA


 * "imaginess"?
 * "It is composed as a four part setting, with the instruments playing colla parte: oboes and violin I enforce the chorale tune, the flutes an octave higher, violin II plays with the alto, viola with the tenor, and the continuo with the bass." -can you improve the prose here, it reads a little like notes.
 * How? I didn't know which instrumental parts play with which vocal until yesterday, and thought is was interesting. --GA
 * I think it was the "viola with the tenor" part and the series of commas when I initially read it but in reading carefully again I agree it's probably OK.♦ Dr. Blofeld  14:48, 16 May 2015 (UTC)


 * There seems to be some inconsistency in capitalisation between the translations, Unschuld and innocence and "glances of Grace" for example. Is this intentional?

All those red links! They can't be notable then if they're missing ;-)♦ Dr. Blofeld  10:37, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Selected recordings


 * Thanks for looking, answered a few, more later --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:23, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
 * I've taken care of the typo, don't worry.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

♦ Dr. Blofeld  14:50, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you, a pleasure, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:01, 16 May 2015 (UTC)