Talk:Loch Ness Monster (roller coaster)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Newtothisedit (talk · contribs) 03:36, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

I'll pick this up for review. Comments will be coming soon.--Newtothisedit (talk) 03:36, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


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Comments

 * "The Loch Ness Monster is the only remaining roller coaster with interlocking loops" Specify that its only remaining one in the world with interlocking loops, right now this could be interpreted as being the only remaining on in the park, country or world.
 * "The announcement followed expansion plans for the Anheuser-Busch brewery in Williamsburg" Link to Williamsburg
 * "athletes in American football, NASCAR racing, ice hockey, and stunt personnel" Add Wikilinks
 * "A week later on June 9, the park hosted the first American Coaster Enthusiasts (ACE) Convention, partially surrounding the roller coaster's opening." Specify that it was the first ever convention, right now it could be interpreted as the parks first convention.
 * "Parts of Python, the sister roller coaster to the Loch Ness Monster, were donated to the park after the former's closure" Add that Python was at Tampa Busch Gardens.
 * ✅ Changed wording for each sentence to better specify per recommendations, added links. Adog  ( Talk ・ Cont ) 17:40, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

Great Job on this article, very well written and informative. Incidentally this is one of the first roller coasters I can vividly remember riding.--Newtothisedit (talk) 17:00, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I appreciate the review! Let me know if there are further corrections to make. I have not made it up to the U.S. northeast parks (besides Hersheypark back in '09) yet, but researching this roller coaster has made it all the more exciting to try to visit some of those theme parks soon. :) Adog  ( Talk ・ Cont ) 17:40, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me, I'll pass it. Newtothisedit (talk) 17:47, 23 October 2022 (UTC)