Talk:Lockdown (2008)/Archive 1

Sting
We all know that Sting will be part of Team Cage but Wiki guidelines state we cannot add it until its officially announced on iMPACT or the TNA website. Looks like we'll have to wait until next week to before we can add it. Jay794 (talk) 10:12, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * "We all know"? You are right in that no one can add him because he has not been announced as part of Cage's team.  TJ   Spyke   20:25, 22 March 2008 (UTC)

Well yeah, anyone who watched iMPACT knows that the music played at the end was Stings cos they also showed his video. Its fact that Sting will be part of Team Cage at Lockdown. Jay794 (talk) 12:18, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
 * No, it's speculation. Remember a few months ago when they said Scott Hall would be Sting's partner and that turned out to be false?  TJ   Spyke   15:23, 23 March 2008 (UTC)

TJ's right. TNA has been known to swerve people. Hence Vince Russo is the booker. Meepboy (talk) 18:10, 23 March 2008 (UTC) 23 March 2008 (UTC)

Supppse it wud be cool to see Sting as a heel but Team Tomko is full Jay794 (talk) 15:45, 24 March 2008 (UTC)

Ahh but as I said before TNA's been known to swerve people... you must think outside the box when your talking about TNA. Meepboy (talk) 17:38, 25 March 2008 (UTC)

They never said Scott Hall would be Stings partner DW and Tenay speculated it but Neither Hall nor Sting said it. Sting will be on team cage but it isnt announced so it doesnt go in.LifeStroke420 (talk) 17:44, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Actually, in the previews for the next weeks iMPACT they did say that Hall would be Sting's partner. Anyways, it's just speculation that Sting will be on Team Cage.  TJ   Spyke   18:26, 25 March 2008 (UTC)

No, NASH said Hall would be Sting's partner, but for anyone who knows the business, we knew it would be Booker.

The Lethal Lockdown match is now a 5-on-5, with James Storm added to Tomko's team and Matt Morgan added to Christian's team. Can't we change it? It's been announced to the live audience at Impact! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.158.184.202 (talk) 13:01, 2 April 2008 (UTC)

How can it have been announced when iMPACT doesn't air till Thursday. Jay794 (talk) 18:24, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Impact is taped usually 4 to 12 days before it airs... 81.64.118.63 (talk) 14:04, 4 April 2008 (UTC)

I have even heard of times that they would tape iMPACT! more than 30 days before it aired. Vermon CaTaffy 8 (talk) 04:35, 11 April 2008 (UTC)

Feedback

 * Lead
 * Remove the abbreviation "PPV" from the sentence. It isn't used again in the section, so it's just unneccessary.
 * Change "As a tradition" to "As per tradition" - it sounds better.
 * Change "Sharmell versus Robert" to "Sharmell against Robert". Avoid the redundancy of the word "versus".
 * "in a mixed tag team match. Which Booker T and Sharmell..." Reword. Perhaps, replace the full stop with a comma.
 * "exception of Samoa Joe and Kurt Angle." - only last names should be used, once the names have been mentioned once in a section. Should read "exception of Joe and Angle."
 * The sentence beginning "The Team Cage and Team Tomko rivalry" is way too long. Add a full stop after "forming a tag team" and then the sentence should start "They competed in the".
 * Change "Kayfabe" to say "storyline", i.e. storyline, and remove the brackets.
 * Change "would be" to "were".
 * Change "would clam" to "claimed".


 * Background
 * Change "Joe would have his own announcement" to "Joe made his own announcement". Avoid using the word "would" - change it to past tense. It sounds better.
 * Done.
 * Change "where he would state" to "where he stated".
 * Done.
 * Change "forever, though it would later be changed" to "forever; although, it was later changed".
 * Done.
 * Change "The reason being, he was (Kayfabe) training" to "In the storyline, he was training".
 * Done.
 * "Angle's defence" - say "Angle's successful defence" just to clarify it.
 * Done.
 * Change "During the time of Joe's training, Angle would also train. He faced new opponents each week on Impact! in MMA fights" to "While Joe did not appear on televison due to his training, Angle's training included him facing new opponents each week on Impact! in MMA fights".
 * Done.
 * Wikilink Tomko. - I forgot that. I once had that Angle fought him and Styles in a MMA fight. I must have forgotten to link his name.
 * Done.
 * "Kurt Angle" to "Angle"
 * Done.
 * Change "Cage decided on" to "Cage picked" - avoid redundancy of "decided on".
 * Done.
 * "Kevin Nash befriended" to "Nash befriended"
 * Done.
 * "a promo came on the TitanTron, showing the return of Sting" - add wikilink for Promo - reword to "a promo was shown on the TitanTron, advertising the return of Sting"
 * Done.
 * "proceed" to "proceeded" - past tense.
 * Done.
 * Change "until Team 3D brought tables into the ring. Before they could use their signature tables, the lights went off and came back on with Sting appearing in the ring with a baseball bat." to "until Team 3D brought their signature tables into the ring. Before they could use the tables, however, the lights went off. When they came back on, Sting had appeared in the ring, wielding a baseball bat."
 * Done.
 * Change "another match was made for the night" to "a match was made for later that night"
 * Done.
 * Remove "in a tag team match" - unneccessary and just elongates the sentence.
 * Done.
 * Change "Team Cage was celebrating its victory when James" to " team Cage celebrated its victory, until James" - With or without Storm?
 * Done.
 * Change "hitting him in" to "and hit him in"
 * Done.
 * Explain why Matt Morgan had the authority to allow Team Tomko to add another member. Is he like the Management Director or something?
 * Not sure how to go about it. Morgan was Cornette's stand in for the night. He is his bodyguard. He has a little authority when Cornette isn't there. So I'm not sure what to call him.
 * Well say that Morgan was Cornette's stand in for the night. The way it is now, it sounds like some random wrestler suddenly decided that the teams sghould increase. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 19:56, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Done.
 * Change "coming to TNA and, in turn, pushing him further down" to "coming to TNA, which pushed him further down"
 * Done.
 * "Sharmell returned" - where had she been? Did Roode hitting her result in her taking time off? If so, say that.
 * Done, kind of.
 * "Security" doesn't need to be capitalised.
 * Done.
 * Change second mention of "Payton Banks" to Banks
 * Done.
 * Change "O.D.B were feuding with Awesome" to "O.D.B were involved in a feud with Awesome"
 * Done.
 * Change all instances (apart from the first) of "Awesome Kong" to "Kong"
 * Done.
 * "which followed Saeed tripping O.D.B from the outside" - huh? I don't understand that at all. Reword it.
 * Done.
 * "A match was later made to take place at Lockdown involving O.D.B and Gail Kim versus Saeed and Awesome Kong." - change to "This resulted in the women's tag team match being made for Lockdown". You've already explained the participants for the match. It sounds redundant to do it again.
 * Done.
 * You use both "B.G." (with full stops) and "BG" (without full stops). Be consistent and use one.
 * Done.
 * Change second/third instances of "Sonjay Dutt" to "Dutt".
 * Done.
 * Change second instance of "Johnny Devine" to Devine.
 * Done.
 * Change " fifth matches were on the April 03 episode of Impact! and the April 10 episode" "fifth matches occured on the April 3 And April 10 editions of Impact!"
 * Done.
 * Change second mention of "Consequences Creed" to Creed.
 * Done.
 * Can you add in how Curry Man and Dutt won their matches? You say it for the rest of the qualifiers, but not them.
 * Done, I didn't know them at the time and I guess never thought to add them in.
 * The first 3 paragraphs begin with "The" and the last 2 begin with "Another". Mix it up, to avoid repition.
 * I'll try, I have it down to only 3 with "The" as the beginning. Not sure what else to do. I have no ideas.

-- I'm logging off now, but I'll finish up later. Hope this helps!! ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 07:20, 12 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Okay, thanks again. I've got them all done besides one which I'm not sure how to go about. I can't believe I missed so many small things. Hopefully I'll learn from my mistakes. This helps me alot. I'm learning from someone who is nice and knows more than me, while I'm also getting a article to GA. This helps a extreme amount. I do have a question. Do I have enough references and are they all placed right?-- Will C  08:22, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * It's no problem, and I'm glad it's helping. Thanks for the compliment! I'll explain: I'm going to do the event section now, followed by the aftermath. Then I'll look at the references and pictures, and then I'll make one final read through of the article to make sure I've caught everything, and that's it's out of universe. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 19:56, 12 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Alright, I'll get the next ones done.-- Will C  21:11, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

-- I gotta go again. I'll back in about3/4 hours and I'll finish then. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 20:15, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Event
 * Does the order of eliminations matter? Like are they staggered entrances, like 2 start off, and then the next one entered 2 minutes later? If not, the order of entrances doesn't matter; it just makes it harder to read.
 * I think you mean the order of entrances. I got rid of them and move the reference.
 * Yes that is what I meant. See? Everyone makes mistakes!! ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 22:46, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Change the second instances of Johnny Devine, Consequences Creed, Sonjay Dutt, and Jay Lethal to Devine Creed Dutt and Lethal.
 * Done.
 * You need to reword some of it. There's a lot of "eliminate him by getting the pin" type sentences, and you've used "eliminate" 5 times in as many sntences. Try to change it up.
 * Okay, I''ve fixed but not sure if it is good enough.
 * Change Sonjay Dutt to Dutt the third time he's mentioned.
 * Done.
 * Reword "Devine tried to escape the cage but, was stopped by Sonjay Dutt, who never left the ring area. Dutt stood on the outside of the cage and kept the cage door shut, not allowing referees to open it, nor allowing Devine to escape through the door. Due to this, Devine tried to climb the cage to the outside" to "Devine tried to escape from the cage but was stopped by Dutt, who never left ringside, and kept the cage-door shut. Due to this, Devine had to climb the cage to attempt to escape."
 * Done.
 * "by giving him a knife, who was tied on the other side of the ring" doesn't make any sense whatsoever.
 * Done, reworded.
 * Who is SoCal Val? Why was she at ringside? If she's Lethals valet add that in.
 * She is the ring girl. She wasn't his valent untl recently. She is always at the ring. So I didn't think to mention it. She is really his love interest. Jay Lethal has a Randy Savage type gimmick. SoCal is suppose to be Miss Elizabeth. So I'm not sure what to say because she is his love interest but I didn't think that would work. She was already at the ring so she isn't his valent. Not sure how to go at this one.-- Will C  22:42, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Hmmm. I'll have to think about this one. Give me a while and I'll think of something. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 22:46, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Alright, maybe it would work it was "SoCal Val, Lethal's girlfriend, and Dutt held the door open."?-- Will C  23:00, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Say Lethal's storyline or on-screen girlfriend and yes it'd be fine. You have to try and keep the article out of universe. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 23:19, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Change "By his victory" to "This vicory meant that"
 * Done.
 * Change "for Number One Contendership" to "for the number one contendership" - it doesn't need to be capitalised.
 * Done.
 * Again, is the entrance order important?
 * Done, I do that with everyone of them. I don't know what I'm doing. I was trying to decribe the event. I guess I know better now.
 * Change "enter the cage were Angelina Love and Roxxi Laveaux" to "enter the cage were Love and Laveaux".
 * Done.
 * Change "Love hit the Lights Out" to "Love performed the Lights Out"
 * Done.
 * Wikilink near fall - near fall
 * Done.
 * Remove "It lasting about seven minutes". I've never seen that written in an event section.
 * Done.
 * Again, you use both B.G. and BG - consistency again. use the one that you sue in the background section.
 * Done.
 * You say "The match was mostly dominated by Kip". Add in how. Say something like " The match was mostly dominated by Kip, who gained control after a ______".
 * Done, It might work. That is what happened but I'm not good at describing stuff.
 * "to handcuff all of the teams to the cage with handcuffs" - you just need to say "to handcuff all of the teams to the cage".
 * Done.
 * Again did entrances make a difference in the match?
 * Done, sorry. I did it for all of them.
 * "Kaz had to compete the match" - add in a "in" - "Kaz had to compete in the match".
 * Done.
 * Remove "The match lasted about eleven minutes."
 * Done.
 * Make sure second mentions of people are last name only. I see Eric Young, Scott Steiner, Alex Shelly, Petey Williams, Chris Sabin, Black Reign, Lance Hoyt, Jimmy Rave and Eric Young again.
 * Done.
 * Grammar - "However" should never be used at the start of a sentence. Change "However, Eric" to "Eric, however,"
 * Done.
 * Change "No less than a minute later, his partner Chris Sabin was cuffed as well by Kaz" to "Less than a minute later, his partner Sabin was also cuffed by Kaz"
 * Done.
 * Change "Eric would cuff" to "Eric cuffed".
 * Done.
 * Change "Because of Eric being the last left" to "Due to Eric being the last person left"
 * Done.


 * Okay, thanks again. I've learned more from my mistakes. Sorry there are so many errors.-- Will C  22:42, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Don't be ridiculous. Half of them aren't errors, I'm just rewording some sentences to make them sound less awkward. ;) BTW, I'm starting a new section as this one os getting riciculiusly long. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 22:46, 12 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Alright. I have another one done. The Morgan one from the Backround is finsihed.-- Will C  23:00, 12 July 2008 (UTC)

Event

 * Change "was next: Awesome Kong" to "was next, with Awesome Kong"
 * Done.
 * "Kong and Saeed dominated most of the match." - again, say how they gained control. It's more encyclopedic to say "Kong and Saeed dominated most of the match, after ____ performed a _____."
 * Done.
 * Change "Kim hit a missile dropkick on Kong to make her unable to defend her partner. O.D.B then climbed" to "Kim hit a missile dropkick on Kong, which enabled O.D.B to climb"
 * Done.
 * Change "undercard was next: Booker T" to "undercard was next, whcih featured Booker T"
 * Done.
 * "stayed behind the ropes." - Do you mean out of the ring, on the apron? If so, change to "stayed out of the ring". "stayed behind the ropes." sounds awkward.
 * Would "stayed behind the ropes on the ring apron." work?
 * Yep. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 23:33, 12 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Alright, fixed.
 * "beat him down" is too informal. Say "control the match".
 * Done.
 * Wikilink "chops" and "low blow"
 * Done.
 * Change "After they left the ring, Roode and Banks had a confrontation. Roode called Banks stupid and blamed her for their lost" to "After they left the ring, Roode and Banks had a confrontation, with Roode blaming Banks for their loss".
 * Done.
 * Change "James Storm (with Jacqueline))" to "James Sorm, who was accompanied by Jacqueline)" - avoid having the double brackets at the end.
 * "The rules of the match stated" - should be "The rules of the match state" to be consistent with tense.
 * Change "It was set to" to "It was supposed to"
 * Change "and did a flying" to "and performed a flying"
 * "bell rung" should be "bell rang".
 * "beat down" - again, too informal/slang - change to dominate.
 * Second instance of "James Storm" - change to Storm.
 * You consistently use "Brother Ray", but then you just say "Devon". Either it's just Ray and Devon or it's Brother ray and Brother Devon.
 * Second instance of Kevin Nash - change to Nash
 * Change "until the next entrance" to "until the next entrant"
 * Second instance of "Matt Morgan", change to Morgan.
 * "dominating every Team Tomko member" - how? mention a move or two he performed.
 * Change "ceiling was lowered. Covered with trash cans, steel chairs, kendo sticks, trash can lids, a table, and a ladder." to "ceiling, which was covered with weapons including a ladder, table, trash cans and kendo sticks, was lowered."
 * Change "As soon as the ceiling finished lowering" to "As soon as the ceiling was fully lowered"
 * Change "weapons as possible. They then started to beat each other with them" to "weapons as possible, and began to use them"
 * Change "most of the members" to "most of the participants"
 * "There they" should be "There, they"
 * "inside of the cage" should be "inside the cage"
 * "table, that" - should be either "table, which" or "table that"
 * "Storm encouraged him on" should be "Storm encouraged him"
 * Change "where he attacked Storm and laid him out. Cage then ascended to the top" to "where he attacked Storm, and then ascended to the top"
 * Change "Storm later woke up and pushed the ladder over, which fell in the direction of the middle, towards a table set up earlier." to "Storm recovered and pushed the ladder over, which fell in the direction of the table, which had been set up earlier."
 * Change "Storm then climbed down into the cage and cracked a beer bottle over the head of Morgan" to "Storm then climbed back down into the cage and hit Morgan in the head with a beer bottle"
 * Change "Joe was the first to enter the arena, but before he entered, Samoan fire dancers came out and performed for the crowd, as a tradition in Joe's proud Samoan heritage." to "Joe entered first, follwing a Samoan fire dancers performance, to show his pride in his Samoan heritage."
 * Also, if you can, wikilink "Samoan fire dancers"
 * Change "Following the performance, Joe entered the arena and walked to the ring. Immediately after Joe entered the ring, Angle entered. Jeremy Borash was seen in the ring with both the Champion and Challenger, as well as Joe's trainer: Marcus Davis, who was to present the victor the TNA Championship, and referee Rudy Charles." to "Angle entered second, and then the introductions were made, including those for the referee Rudy Charles, Jeremy Borash, and Marcus Davis, Joe's trainer and who was to present the victor with the TNA Championship."
 * Also, say who Jeremy Borash is.
 * Change "Introductions were then done for all of them. When introductions came to Joe and Angle it switched to MMA and Professional Boxing style introductions." to "Joe and Angle's introductions were done in the style of MMA and Professional Boxing introductions."
 * Change "Video switched to Kurt Angle's wife Karen Angle, who was sitting in attendance. Angle became enraged, and demanded that she be removed from the building. She was escorted by security out of the building screaming obscenities." to "Karen Angle, Angle's wife, was shown on-screen, enraging Angle. He had her removed from the building as she screamed obscenities."
 * Also say why seeing Karen enraged Kurt. Are they separated or something?
 * A long story. She wanted a divorce. He was trying to consentrate on Joe. He didn't want nothing to do with her while he was fighting Joe. I had a promo on here that talked about it but I was told to remove it.-- Will C  00:06, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * You'll have to think of a way to add something in. It seems weird otherwise. Perhaps, say because he thought that she would distract him or something. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 00:16, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Second instance of "Rudy Charles" should be "Charles"
 * Can you wikilink "Chain-wrestling"?
 * To what?-- Will C  00:06, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't know what you mean by chain-wrestling. Is it Catch wrestling? ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 00:16, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Change "There were counters from one submission move to another as each man tried to gain the advantage" to "As each man tried to gain the advantage, they countered the other's submission moves."
 * Change "throat, he then" to "throat. He then"
 * Change second instance of "Marcus Davis" to "Davis"
 * Change "TNA Championship immediately following his victory. Joe then celebrated his victory as the event came to a close" to "TNA Championship and Joe celebrated his victory as the event came to a close."

Aftermath

 * "the April 27, 2008" - the 2008 is unneccessary. Remove it.
 * Change "Joe won after performing a Muscle Buster, which followed Steiner hitting Angle with a lead pipe" to "Joe won after Steiner hit Angle with a lead pipe, allowing Joe to perform a Muscle Buster."
 * "Change "Cornette said the Triple Threat would still happen even though Angle was injured." to "Cornette declared that the Triple Threat would still happen despite Angle's injury."
 * Spelling - "unseccessful" should be "unsuccessful"
 * Spell Check must have missed that. lol.-- Will C'''  00:12, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Change "Feast or Fired Briefcase, which had a X Division Championship match in it, on Lethal" to "Feast or Fired Briefcase, which gave him a X Division Championship match, against Lethal"
 * Change "result, Jim Cornette" to "result, Management Director Cornette"
 * Change "had been kayfabe injured in Japan" to "had sustanied a storyline injury in Japan"
 * Change "World tag titles" to "World Tag Team titles"

Results

 * In the main table and in the "Xscape match Eliminations" table, under times, singles number (i.e. matches under 10 minutes) should have a "0" in front, to allow it to sort properly. So, 5:27 would be 05:27.
 * In the "Xscape match Eliminations" in the notes section, say "Pinfall after a _____"
 * In the "Cuffed in the Cage Eliminations" table, wikilink everyone in the "Eliminated Wrestler" column, and no-one in the "Eliminated By" column.
 * In the "Cuffed in the Cage Eliminations" table, the headings should be "Elimination number", "Eliminated wrestler" and "Eliminated by"

Images

 * Per WP:MOS, the Kurt Angle picture in the Background should be on the right.
 * Again, per WP:MOS, the Samoa Joe picture in the Event section should be on the left.
 * In the event scetion, could you move some of the pictures up a little? There's none for 5 paragraphs, and then 4 all at once. Perhaps remove the AJ Styles one, and add a picture of either Jay Lethal, Roxxi Laveaux, B.G. James, or Eric Young.
 * Okay, after I find a good picture of one of them.-- Will C  00:20, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Final read through

 * Lead
 * Change "The Team Cage and Team Tomko rivalry ended afterwards, with Rhino and Cage forming a tag team. They competed in the Deuces Wild Tag Team Tournament for the vacant TNA World Tag Team Championship at Sacrifice. While Tomko sustained an on-screen injury in Japan." to "The Team Cage and Team Tomko rivalry ended afterwards, with Rhino and Cage forming a tag team, while Tomko sustained an on-screen injury in Japan. They competed in the Deuces Wild Tag Team Tournament for the vacant TNA World Tag Team Championship at Sacrifice."


 * Background
 * Can you move the Kurt Angle photo down a little? Just to avoid all the white space at the top.
 * Change MMA to Mixed Martial Arts and wikilink it.
 * Change "a match was made for later that night between Sting, Cage, Rhino, and Nash versus Styles, Tomko, and Team 3D" to "a match was made for later that night with Sting, Cage, Rhino, and Nash versus Styles, Tomko, and Team 3D"
 * "fractured a her jaw" should just be "fractured her jaw".
 * You still have the first three paragraphs in the section beginning with "The". In the second paragraph change "The secondary feud going into Lockdown" to "Going into Lockdown, the secondary feud"


 * Event
 * In one place it says "Curry man". You have the "m" capitalised the rest of the time. Be consistent.
 * Change "climb the cage to attempt to escape" to "climb the cage in an attempt to escape"
 * Change "hand in victory and to show a sign of friendship," to "hand in victory and as a sign of friendship,"
 * Change "ODB" to "O.D.B." for consistency.
 * I forgot about those. I really need to make sure I don't miss anything on Destination X and Victory Road.
 * The caption for the Booker T image should read "Booker T ended his with Robert Roode at Lockdown"
 * Change "size and advange in strength" to "size and strength advantage"
 * Change "because of them being separated at the time and he didn't want a distraction from his match." to "as they were separated at the time, and he didn't want to be distracted from his match."
 * Could you move the Joe picture up a few lines, to avoid it screwing with the "aftermath" title?
 * The Joe picture caption should read "Samoa Joe, who won the TNA World Heavyweight Championship for the first time at Lockdown"


 * Aftermath
 * The first instance of "Joe" and "Angle" should be "Samoa Joe" (wikilinked) and "Kurt Angle" (wikilinked).
 * Jay Lethal should be wikilinked
 * You have "Latin American xchange" wikilinked twice. remove the second one.


 * Results
 * If you're going to have 2 columns for the results section, increase the size of the "Lethal Lockdown entrances" one. It looks very squashed.
 * I didn't do that. So I'm not sure how to do what you want me to do.-- Will C  06:49, 14 July 2008 (UTC)


 * References
 * OK, the OBD/Kim/Saaed reference isn't that important, it's logical to think that they were annoyed about her costing them title matches. Ok, the Tomko one is fine too.
 * The references that are there are reliable, and if the reviewer wants more references, I think the SLAM! one definetly should cover most of the info in the event section. I don't think you'll have a problem with that.
 * Alright. Done.-- Will C  06:49, 14 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Once you've completed these, you can add the article to the waiting list! Good luck, ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 23:52, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * By the way, Nikki did some more copyediting after I did this review, so if the mistakes I've highlighted aren't there, that's why. ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 05:43, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I saw she did a copyedit. She didn't have anything bad to say, just that I don't need to source some twice if I already have a reliable source for it. Thank you very much for the help. You'll be the first one I thank if it makes it to GA.-- Will C  06:49, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * It's no problem! Don't worry about the column thing, Nikki got it and it looks fine! Now add it to the waiting list!! ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 06:56, 14 July 2008 (UTC)


 * I will as soon as I figure out how to close a peer review.-- Will C  07:22, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Pre-FAC review
Hopefully, these will save a few headaches at FAC. I'm going to be swamped in real life, so I may not be able to give a review at FAC immediately.  Giants2008  ( 17-14 ) 05:01, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * The recent wrestling FAs all explain the various moves by the wrestlers. This serves to reduce the jargon in the article. Unless the wrestling project has changed its view recently, I'd suggest fleshing out moves like The Voodoo Drop.
 * What is it not explained enough? I'll see what I can do.-- Will C  09:10, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * "B.G. was victorious in the match when he grabbed Kip and pulled him down over onto his back...". Too much going on with "down over onto". It makes me not understand what is being written.
 * Any better. It is kind of long.-- Will C  09:10, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * A few of the wrestlers in the fourth match need links.
 * They have links in the background. That is why they aren't linked there.-- Will C  09:10, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Main event matches: "in a what is known as a flying forearm strike.
 * Fixed.-- Will C  09:10, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't like the "The ceiling was lowered covered with" sentence; an adjustment would be a good idea.
 * I've worked on it.-- Will C  09:10, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Remove the capital letters from Mixed Martial Arts and Professional Boxing.
 * Fixed.-- Will C  09:10, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * "and to start the longest TNA World Heavyweight Championship reign;" Change the semi-colon to a comma?
 * Fixed.-- Will C  09:10, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Reception: "Simon Rothstein, a journalist for the United Knigdom newspaper The Sun, in his review when he spoke of the main event..." Too wordy. Try working off of this: "Simon Rothstein, a journalist for the United Knigdom newspaper The Sun, wrote in his review that the main event..." I'm sure that can be improved further, but it will do for now.
 * I've worked on it. How did I do?-- Will C  09:10, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
 * All your comments are finished. What do you think of the changes?-- Will C  09:10, 14 November 2008 (UTC)