Talk:Locked Out of Heaven/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk · contribs) 19:13, 20 June 2014 (UTC)

Overview
Prose: See below Resolved

Sourcing: See below Resolved

Coverage: See below Resolved

Neutrality: See below Resolved

Stability: No issues

GA Result: On hold for seven days Passed

Details

 * Lead
 * "The song was written by Mars, Philip Lawrence and Ari Levine, and produced by Mark Ronson, Jeff Bhasker, Emile Haynie and The Smeezingtons"..... you should first establish that Lawrence, Levine, and Mars are The Smeezingtons by adding "of The Smeezingtons" after Levine.
 * "Good sex" is POV, try instead "euphoria from sex"
 * "While others music critics noted the song influences by a number of bands, with The Police being most cited, Mars admitted that he was influenced by the band to write the song" → "While some critics noted influences from various bands, mainly The Police, Mars stated that The Police influenced him to write the song"
 * Remove the hyphen from "top-ten"
 * Fixed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:56, 21 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Composition and influences
 * Per MOS:QUOTEMARKS, ′ should be ' (check the quote for these instances)
 * Fixed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:56, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Check again- you missed some Snuggums (talk • contributions) 22:53, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I forgot to check the second paragraph.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:15, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Not a big problem, just remember to double-check Snuggums (talk • contributions) 23:57, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the advice. I think it's fixed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:01, 22 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * Link Kitty Empire
 * Linked. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:56, 21 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Chart performance
 * Europe and Oceania
 * Daily Mirror is not a reliable source
 * Replaced. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:29, 21 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Music video
 * Development and synopsis
 * More MOS:QUOTEMARKS issues to address within quotes and bit on dancing monkeys
 * Remove the commas from "Idolator reviewer, Sam Lansky, wrote"
 * Everything from "Idolator reviewer" to "good one nonetheless" belongs in "reception" section"
 * Fixed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:18, 21 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Reception
 * This should be expanded by moving the critic's opinions above to here
 * I'm skeptical about "chiff.com"
 * Fixed the first issue and I have only replaced one of the chiff.com links. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:38, 21 June 2014 (UTC)


 * References
 * Something is wrong with ref#23 (AllMusic)
 * Link Eddy Hartenstein
 * Link Arthur Ochs Sulzberger, Jr.
 * "PopMatters" should not be italicized
 * Link Guardian Media Group
 * ref#82 is missing "Idolator"
 * CBS News should not be italicized
 * "Hollywood Reporter" should read The Hollywood Reporter and be italicized
 * ref#89 is missing BBC
 * All the issues with the references have been adressed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:15, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Now passing. Snuggums (talk • contributions) 00:03, 22 June 2014 (UTC)