Talk:Loetoeng Kasaroeng/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 14:17, 25 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Wow that was fast. Thanks! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:19, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for thanking me! I going to do the review right now. Cheers, TBrandley 14:31, 25 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox: Why is it shown as "December 31, 1926", there, in the infobox, and shown as "31 December 1926" in release section. Please choose only date format.
 * That's what I get when I forget to run my scripts. Done


 * Lede: "it is also the first film to feature a native Indonesian cast" remove also, makes it look weird with the rest of the sentence.
 * Done


 * Production: "mostly" → "generally"
 * Done


 * Legacy: "writes" → "wrote"
 * Done


 * References: Footnotes and Bibliography should be sub-sections as per MOS:ACCESS
 * They are (check the code)


 * External links: TV.com link?
 * Not on that site. Most Indonesian films have poor entries on the usual EL destinations, if they have them at all.


 * External links: Add a portal box, with "Film portal" and "Indoesnia portal" in it.
 * Done


 * External links: Categories below should be sorted in alphabetical order
 * Done

Wow; great work. This is in great shape, but will be put on hold for now until those very little concerns are fixed. Article is pretty solid. TBrandley 14:41, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Done all. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:33, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Well done. Pass! TBrandley 15:16, 26 August 2012 (UTC)