Talk:Log line

Hook
Is there an additional example that could be included that emplys the emotional "hook" as described? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.92.244.192 (talk) 02:54, 5 April 2014 (UTC)

Introduction
The first paragraph contains two contradictory sentences back to back: ""[A logline is for] defining the theme of the project...and suggest[ing] a bigger meaning."[4] "A logline is [...] not a statement of theme but rather a premise."[5]"". Should caveats be provided for both sentences (e.g., explanations of who said the quotes), or should one be deleted?

UnePatateFrancaise (talk) 05:27, 22 December 2021 (UTC).