Talk:Lois Lowry

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 13 January 2020 and 20 April 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Grace Rohan.

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 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20080311103355/http://pabook.libraries.psu.edu/palitmap/bios/Lowry_Lois.html to http://pabook.libraries.psu.edu/palitmap/bios/Lowry_Lois.html
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Tone issues
Most of this article reads like a autobiography or a profile in a news source, and not like a encyclopedia article. e.g. "It was during this coursework that she was introduced to photography, which became a lifelong passion as well as a profession." CrocodilesAreForWimps (talk) 19:17, 11 February 2018 (UTC)

BLP noticeboard Clovermoss (talk) 21:29, 14 April 2019 (UTC)

Editing Article for Organization and Tone
Hi there! I'm a student in a technical editing course this semester, and I will be working on this article for the next couple of weeks. I will mostly be focusing my revisions on the organization of the article, and on editing content to comply with standards for a Biograohy of a living person (WP:BLP). I do not think the tone issue has been resolved; there are still lines which read more like an autobiography than an encyclopedia, and which do not completely convey a neutral tone. I will also work on rearranging some of the information in the article; I think, for example, that the "Early life" and "Early career" sections could be merged into one section, perhaps titled "Personal life" or something along those lines. Please free to talk to me about any changes I make, or if you have any other concerns, input, or suggestions! Grace Rohan (talk) 21:46, 29 February 2020 (UTC)