Talk:Long Range Desert Group/GA1

GA Review
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'GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * Not really a dab link but have specified imperial
 * Not really a dab link but have specified imperial


 * B. MoS compliance:
 * Changed to Battle --Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:24, 18 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Changed to Battle --Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:24, 18 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Change section Operations to History. WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 16:24, 17 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Changed to History --Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:24, 18 August 2010 (UTC)


 * A copyedit would be appreciated. WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 20:41, 24 August 2010 (UTC)
 * Anything in particular its already had one from the Copy Editors Guild ? --Jim Sweeney (talk) 08:41, 25 August 2010 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * There nothing much can be added. They like the old soldier just faded away, the Special Air Service in all the armies involved British, New Zealand and Rhodesian took over this type of operation.  --Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:24, 18 August 2010
 * I have added a bit more about being part of the SAS Association to the section. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 09:19, 20 August 2010 (UTC)
 * A. Major aspects:
 * There nothing much can be added. They like the old soldier just faded away, the Special Air Service in all the armies involved British, New Zealand and Rhodesian took over this type of operation.  --Jim Sweeney (talk) 11:24, 18 August 2010
 * I have added a bit more about being part of the SAS Association to the section. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 09:19, 20 August 2010 (UTC)
 * I have added a bit more about being part of the SAS Association to the section. --Jim Sweeney (talk) 09:19, 20 August 2010 (UTC)

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 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 00:14, 17 August 2010 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 23:40, 16 August 2010 (UTC)