Talk:Long Sault Parkway/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:37, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

Shall review for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 14:37, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Don't think the term Canadian should be linked; how about linking Canadian province to the relevant article?
 * The wikilink for St. Lawrence Seaway doesn't need to be directed to Saint Lawrence Seaway

Route description

 * Wikilink St. Lawrence Parks Commission
 * "The later contains a nature trail as well as a boat launch.[3][1][8]" - I think the refs would be better off in numerical order
 * In the third and fourth paragraphs, some mentions of "named for" can be changed for variety
 * How's that? Threw in a couple "honouring" and "named after" and even managed to slip in a "in remembrance of"
 * "as well as the Lock 21 and Camp Carp campsites.[4][1][8]" - the numbering of the refs might be better off placed in numerical order
 * "The Long Sault Parkway is considered one of the most scenic drives in Ontario." - considered by whom?
 * The people and magazines listed through the remainder of that paragraph. -  Floydian  τ ¢ 18:28, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * How about add the reviewers names of The Globe and Mail and Ultimate Ontario since they are mentioned in their articles?
 * I'm not seeing a reviewer byline, so I'm not sure what to do for this one. However, if you are seeing something I'm not, feel free to add it in. -  Floydian  τ ¢ 18:28, 10 July 2021 (UTC)

History

 * Moses-Saunders Power Dam doesn't need to be linked here
 * "At 8 am, 30 tons" - the convert template is missing on the text in bold
 * TNT equivalent doesn't really have a conversion that I know of. -  Floydian  τ ¢ 18:28, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Department of Mines might benefit from being wikilinked

Major intersections

 * "The entire route is located in the United Counties of Stormont, Dundas and Glengarry." - needs verifying with a reliable source