Talk:Loose Loot

Composition problems
Second paragraph of plot and other paragraphs have syntax and composition problems and need to be rewritten Dstreb (talk) 00:49, 5 July 2021 (UTC) Agree, second paragraph is illegible and should be reworked — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.228.88.164 (talk) 00:25, 6 October 2021 (UTC)