Talk:Loot (2012 film)/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 08:34, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's it, on hold, cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:36, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "directed and written by Nischal Basnet in his directorial" director repeated. ✅
 * "under the banners " doesn't feel encyclopedic.✅
 * "plot to rob a bank in Kathmandu." is that it? I would have thought the lead could have a little more on the film.✅
 * " and received critical acclaim and developed " and ... and..., avoid this.✅
 * " 52 (52,000,000) million" no need for the parenthetical text.✅
 * " Loot grossed 52 (52,000,000) million " this is normally in the infobox, any word on the budget?✅
 * "121 Minutes" M->m✅
 * "Haku Kale plans" he plans.✅
 * "within five months" an odd timeframe, any known reason why? --> No Idea.
 * "Khatri and Pandey will get everyone inside a room" by everyone do you really mean customers and employees of the bank? ✅
 * "On the same day of the " -> "On the day of the "✅
 * "run away. The police capture four members of the gang excluding Haku Kale, who runs away" run away x2, perhaps the first one could be "escape"?✅
 * "gang, he was also planning to rob the bank with" -> "gang with whom is was also planning to rob the bank." ✅
 * "to run away " a third "run away"!✅
 * "how he fooled the police." this isn't noted, how did he?✅
 * "(Short Role)" what does this mean and why is it in capitals?✅
 * "and intended to" was intended.✅
 * "length?".[2] " no need for the full stop. Check for others. ✅
 * "he team wondered whether the film would ever be made" why?✅
 * " and that Rai " probably "but that" rather than "and that".✅
 * "to film Loot at locations that had never been filmed in before" repetitive and awkward.✅
 * "a lot of problems" several problems.✅
 * "fourteen-to fifteen-storey" but they were okay up to and including 13-story and 16-story and above??!✅
 * "Loot was released" italics for film title.✅
 * "52.0 million (approximately $453,000 in 2019) rupees (NPR).[5] " no need for the decimal place (.0) and put the conversion to $ after rupees, and probably just use NPR as you abbreviated it in the lead already.✅
 * "a cult following.[13][14][15][8] " order.✅
 * Are the Dcine awards really notable? Is there any other Wikipedia which deems them notable?  If not, inter-language link them, if not then reconsider if they're worthy of noting.✅
 * Films featuring an item number is a category: firstly I don't understand it at all, secondly this doesn't seem to be backed up in any way within the article?✅
 * All done.  CAPTAIN MEDUSA   talk  12:28, 11 April 2020 (UTC)