Talk:Lord Viren/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:32, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:32, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Infobox and lead
 * Don't use WP:SMALLFONT in the infobox.
 * Done.
 * Add alt text to the character's image.
 * Done. I haven't done alt text in a long time, so I hope the description I wrote is good enough. Not sure if I should also mention his race / skin colour. --PanagiotisZois (talk) 15:18, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Use "plainlist" instead of
 * Done
 * Feel free to remove unused parameters.
 * Done
 * The lead is well-written; no issues there.


 * Other stuff
 * Add a serial comma after "master of dark magic".
 * Done.
 * Remove the comma after "recognizes the mirror".
 * Done.
 * Remove the comma after "exposes his treachery".
 * Done.
 * "when told is was" - typo?
 * My mistake. The sentence is saying that when the friend in question was "told he [Viren] was" practical, he agreed for his name to be used.
 * "Remove the comma after "retained its layers".
 * Done.
 * Slashfilm /Film
 * Done.
 * Sources are archived.