Talk:Loreen Olson

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Molly's Critiques:

1. All the parts are here and they all seemed very full and well written. 2. The opening is good and I like that it touches on all the important facts. 3. I thought everything was very clear and easy to read. It was already in wiki format which was nice, and I did not find any spelling errors. The only grammar thing I found is that I think the first sentence of your article should be “an assistant professor,” not “a assistant professor.” 4. Overall, I this article seems super strong and it was very well written. I thought this was a really impressive draft.

Kim's Critiques:

•	All the parts seem to be there and I did not see any spelling errors. •	In the scholarly work section maybe you can give one or two examples after you say “this book looks into the communication of the darker side of family life” just to clarify the meaning like does Olson talk about lying, arguing, abuse? •	Does Olson ever use synonyms in her book, I noticed dark was used frequently in the scholarly work section, but I am unsure. Maybe that is the only word to use. •	The opening hook is good but could be improved. (Mine as well haha) I tried looking at other Wikipedia articles. I looked at a lady named Rachel Carson that was a good example. It says what her profession was plus what she made an impact in. So maybe something along that lines? •	Overall, I enjoyed the article! There is a lot of good information. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kmor810 (talk • contribs) 13:59, 6 April 2017 (UTC)

Great suggestions, peer reviewers! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aburnett412 (talk • contribs) 02:00, 26 April 2017 (UTC)

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