Talk:Loren Rush

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 00:00, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Appropriate infobox should be added
 * Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
 * Basic biographical information required, including place of birth, education details, positions held etc
 * Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * After expansion, article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
 * Information on works should be expanded to include other works, and address genre, critical reception etc
 * List of works would be interesting
 * References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format
 * External links to useful online resources should be added if available