Talk:Lorena B

Fluff
There was a lot of fluff in the intro and bio, which I tried to trim. I'd suggest limiting the positive adjectives, and try staying neutral. Quinn ☂THUNDER 01:42, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

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External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to 1 one external link on Lorena B. Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20110707050128/http://www.bbc.co.uk:80/programmes/b011fnnj to http://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/b011fnnj

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