Talk:Lorenzo Neal

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The text about his NFL career is written in an oddly chatty style with rhetorical questions to the reader. I'm not sure about policy, but it doesn't gel well with other wikipedia biographies. - {Radishcat}
 * It was basically coppied off of a profile on team website or something like that.  Cra sh  Underride  19:08, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

POV
Adding POV tag to the article. The player profile is very biased and almost sounds like it was ripped off of some sports website. bob rulz 04:35, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Actually, they did :-p -- ShadowJester07 ► Talk  03:55, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Cleaned up, alot.  Cra sh  Underride  19:08, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

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