Talk:Lost Coast Brewery

"International Uproar"
To place a story about the controversy over the naming of one beer in the entry summary seems over the top. While evidence of this controversy can be found online, it does not appear to be as newsworthy as this would suggest. Furthermore, if it is noteworthy enough to include a sentence about 'international uproar' in the summary, one would think it should be followed (and appropriately supported) in the main body of the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:30A:2E11:6E60:5050:DC5B:C35F:84 (talk) 16:12, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

Untitled
Is the Indica IPA no longer being brewed? I thought I'd seen it within the last month or two at my local supermarket. GMontag 13:30, 5 May 2006 (UTC)

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Instructor comments
what happened to the male co-owner mentioned in the early versions of this article?

delete "official website" link in lead

delete colons in headings

eliminate all editorializing and opinion, unless attributed to someone else, such as first sentence of History

spellcheck througout History. dont include the words "official website" in your text. This section is full of promotional language.

Products--proofread--this is full of errors

"just as its name hints at" not encyclopedia style. Would you find this in the World Book?

[link title] means you've clicked internal link but havent entered the citation

The team isnt informative enough. Use something like "Sponsorships"

this is a start. You'll have to get more familiar with the code in the editing window. means you replace link title with the URL you are citing.

Rudolph2007 (talk) 03:48, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

17 May

footnotes and citations are still not properly formatted

Their eight microbrews are based on founders Barbara Groom and Wendy Pound planning and research of English beers.

this sentence needs rephrasing. Brews arent based on founders. Planning of beers?

Limited Release Specialies for 2009--proofread

"See also California breweries"--not a heading. Add this to your categories box.

"went under construction"--underwent restoration

and family owned and opporated ever since. The brewery out grew its origines in Pythians Castle and has moved to a larger building farther down Highway 101.

2 spelling errors

and after producing 24,000 barrels in 2005

dont include this outdated and irrelevant information

Lost Coast is currently brewing eight beers to date with six seasonal beers; all with based on an English style and tasting beer.

you need to proofread, or get someone to proofread with you.

It is a brown ale lightly hopped with a hint of roasted and crystal malts. A dark beer in color without the strong heavy taste of a porter or a stout.

not your language, but this also includes a sentence fragment

received a gold medal at the LA County Fair and anther one in 2003

proofread

sent.

spelling

is being one of the world’s taste beers

not English

six members to the 2009 team, they will be competing at the US Cup series and many other California

members of...comma splice in this sentence.

This article is still short of publishable quality.

D Rudolph2007 (talk) 15:59, 17 May 2009 (UTC)

June 1

Good work. This is now of publishable quality. You might want to let Lost Coast know that you've done it.

B

Rudolph2007 (talk) 15:41, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

Historic Structure
The current building is an historic commercial structure worth mentioning, along with dates. It will be in the "Green" Book. Previously, it was the site of the locally owned "Everybody's Furniture" store for decades, though I have no information on the use at the time of original construction. Norcalal (talk) 00:11, 16 January 2014 (UTC)

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