Talk:Lost in Your Light/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ashleyyoursmile (talk · contribs) 05:25, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I shall take on this review. -- Ashley yoursmile!  05:25, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks great
 * from Lipa's eponymous debut studio album (2017) → for Lipa's eponymous debut studio album (2017)
 * It was written by → The song was written by
 * written by Lipa, Miguel and Rick Nowels, and produced by Miguel and Stephen Kozmeniuk → written by Lipa, Miguel and Rick Nowels, while production was handled by Miguel and Stephen Kozmeniuk
 * The song was released for → It was released for
 * for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records as the album's sixth single on 21 April 2020 → for digital download and streaming as the album's sixth single on 21 April 2017 through Warner Bros. Records
 * Can "R&B-pop" be targeted to its appropriate page? If so, do the same in the infobox as well
 * Targeted to Contemporary R&B as R&B (pop) redirects there. LOVI  33  15:30, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Its lyrics talk about → The lyrics talk about
 * Link "music critics" to "music journalism"
 * from music critics: the singers' vocal performance was praised, but Miguel's guest appearance was criticized → from music critics, who praised the singers' vocal performance but criticized Miguel's guest appearance
 * Link "certification" to Music recording certification
 * The song's music video premiered on 26 May 2017 → The music video was directed by Henry Schofield and premiered on YouTube on 26 May 2017
 * It was directed by Henry Schofield and filmed in Los Angeles → "Filmed in Los Angeles," then add something about what the video features
 * with performances in BBC Radio 1's live lounge → with performances on BBC Radio 1's live lounge
 * Mention "Glastonbury Festival" instead since that's how its written in the main body. No need to pipe-link

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Background and composition

 * as one of the last songs for Lipa's debut album → as one of the last songs for Lipa's eponymous debut album
 * as "one of the happiest" song from the album → as "one of the happiest" songs from the album
 * Link "chorus" to "refrain" on the caption of the audio snippet
 * Can the caption of the audio sample be expanded a bit? Perhaps add something about the chorus?
 * Again can "R&B-pop" be targeted to its appropriate page?
 * Link "rhythms" to "rhythms"
 * Link "percussion" to itself
 * Link "grooves" to "groove (music)"

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Release and promotion

 * released for digital download and streaming through Warner Bros. Records on 21 April 2020 as the sixth single from Lipa's debut album → released for digital download and streaming on 21 April 2017 in various countries by Warner Bros. Records as the sixth single from Lipa's debut album
 * "It was later included as the second track on the album, released 2 June 2017" Remove this sentence since you have already mentioned that the song was released as a single from the album

, it is notable to include its track list placing. LOVI 33  15:48, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Mention when the song was serviced to contemporary hit radio in both countries
 * Mention the dates of the performances of the song

✅, also replaced citations for date confirmation. LOVI 33  15:48, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Merge this section with "Commercial performance" and re-title to "Reception"
 * mixed reviews from critics → mixed reviews from music critics
 * Craighead labelled it a "pop banger," → Craighead of The Fader labelled the song as a "pop banger,"
 * and praised the chorus as "catchy." → and praised its chorus as "catchy."
 * "Rap-Up praised the song" → "Rap-Up commended the track" to avoid repetition
 * called the song "starry", and Wass praised the production and vocals → called the song "starry", with the latter complimenting the production and vocals
 * Miguel's guest appearance, writing he "he gives it → Miguel's guest appearance, writing "he gives it
 * as well as praising its "sensual side", different from Lipa's previous releases. → and likened its "sensual side" for being different from Lipa's previous releases
 * Bianca Gracie of Fuse praised the singers' "smooth-as-velvet" vocals → Bianca Gracie of Fuse appreciated the singers' "smooth-as-velvet" vocals
 * After this sentence of Fuse, merge the next paragraph with this paragraph
 * For Rolling Stone, Ryan Reed labelled the song "seductive" and Miguel's appearance "passionate." → Ryan Reed from Rolling Stone regarded the song as "seductive" and Miguel's appearance as "passionate."
 * list, with its description being that it is "a starlit rollerskating → list, with the publication writing that it is "a starlit rollerskating

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Commercial performance

 * This section should start as the second paragraph of "Reception"
 * The song departed the chart the following week, lasting two non-consecutive weeks, re-entering at number 98 after the release of its parent album on the chart dated 9 June 2017. → The song departed the chart the following week, re-entering at number 98 after the release of its parent album on the issue dated 9 June 2017, lasting two non-consecutive weeks
 * In February 2020, the song received a silver certification from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI). → In February 2020, it was awarded a silver certification from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI), for track-equivalent sales of 200,000 units.

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Music video

 * Can you mention if the music video premiered on Lipa's YouTube channel?
 * It was directed by Henry Schofield → The video was directed by
 * She begins to kick up her legs where three people → In the following scene, she begins to kick up her legs when three people
 * A group of dance join them, snapping → A group of dancers join them, snapping
 * are then seen walking towards one and other on a ledge, → are then seen walking towards each other on a ledge,
 * in the parking lot, → inside the parking lot,
 * Reed viewed the visual as "minimalist," → Reed of Rolling Stone viewed the visual as "minimalist,"
 * Mark Braboy called the visual "alluring" and state dit captures → Mark Braboy called the visual "alluring" and stated that it captures
 * The word "praised" has been used way many times. Try to use alternatives of the word instead

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Track listing

 * Great

Credits and personnel

 * Use
 * Should "synthesizers" be used instead of "synths"?
 * Changed. LOVI  33  16:22, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

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Charts

 * Great

Certifications

 * Great

Release history

 * Great

Outcome

 * for 7 days. Great to do this review. Good luck!  Ashley  yoursmile!  07:42, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * I have addressed all your comments. Is there anything else I can do? LOVI  33  16:39, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
 * LOVI33, Great work. Gladly passing this. ✅ Keep up the good work with Dua Lipa's articles. -- Ashley yoursmile!  17:05, 4 August 2020 (UTC)