Talk:Loti (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:40, 18 February 2022 (UTC)

I will review this today --K. Peake 07:40, 18 February 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Pipe urban to Urban contemporary music in the infobox
 * Remove EMM from brackets since abbreviations of labels are not useful here, plus shouldn't Loudcom Media be the first label listed?
 * Add "as a single" after the release date
 * ""Loti" was composed and" → "The song was composed and" plus this should be swapped with the release sentence for correct order
 * "by Gjata, and produced as well as arranged by" → "by Gjata, while produced and arranged by" and remove the German producers introduction
 * Pipe urban to Urban contemporary music*"with its lyrics telling a tale of a woman, who losses" → "with the lyrics telling a tale of a woman, who loses" to avoid overusage of it
 * There's not enough reviews for a clear consensus, so write something like some critics or a few music critics to avoid bias
 * ""Loti" experienced success" → "The song experienced success"
 * "and further reached" → "while further reaching"

Background and composition

 * Remove "had previously" since this is the beginning of the section and also the only teaser mentioned
 * The announced and ultimate release date was 10 June 2021, so alter appropriately
 * Pipe urban to Urban contemporary music
 * "who losses the intimacy" → "who loses the intimacy"
 * "yourself, would you?"." → "yourself, would you?"" per MOS:QUOTE on quotes ending with specified punctuation like this

Reception

 * Remove the overview part because there's not enough reviews to back it up
 * Bong Mines Entertainment should not be italicised
 * "give a "traditional and "ethnic"" → "give a "traditional, ethnic""
 * The chart-topping position is not mentioned by [12] unless my translator is faulty
 * [13] shows a song previously charted in 2019, making this not her first hit in Switzerland
 * "at number 47 and 61," → "at numbers 47 and 61,"

Music video

 * Img looks good!
 * Remove for "Loti" after accompanying music video
 * "alongside Albanian producer Borin Leka." → "alongside producer Borin Leka." because Albanian is the most recently used nationality
 * Remove generally praised by reviewer at the start of the sentence
 * The word "fancy" is not used in the source at all
 * It's mentioned in the mid-lead of the article; in Albanian "lezetshëm" means chic, sweet or cute. Iaof2017 (talk) 12:46, 19 February 2022 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Track listing

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Year-end charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Release history

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION
 * Label → Label(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 10:16, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi . Thank you for your review I solved your comments, but left a reply on a comment above. :) Iaof2017 (talk) 13:03, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now; I understand your point about fancy and did some quick copy editing myself! --K. Peake 10:21, 20 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank youu. :D Iaof2017 (talk) 13:03, 20 February 2022 (UTC)