Talk:Lotto (The Office)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:31, 3 September 2012 (UTC)


 * General
 * Overall, in this article, I see lots of curly quotes, when regular ' quotes should be used, rather than ’ curly quotes
 * Whoops. I think I got them all now.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * I did a little copy-edit
 * Thanks!-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Lede
 * NBC → the National Broadcasting Company (NBC), as per MOS:ACRO, for its first mention
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Plot
 * "$"? US dollar? Canadian dollar?
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * "don't", "doesn't". Don't use contractions. Write out fully as "did not", "does not"
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Production
 * "Lotto" was written by co-executive producer and frequent series writer Charlie Grandy." reference?
 * It's the one after the Krasinski info. I bundled it at the end rather than repeat it.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * "The official website for The Office", don't think that's important to the subject
 * I've only included it because all of the other season 8 articles use similar language. I don't want to start using a different format randomly in the middle.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Perhaps add TV rating from NBC.com
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Cultural references
 * Nothing to be found


 * Reception
 * Ratings: What channel was it on? It's nowhere to be seen.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * % → percent
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * first-season → first season
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)


 * References
 * Why do some references use the UK format (Ref. 17), and some use US format? Please only choose one
 * I think they're gone now.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref. 2: "The Office, season 8" Season should be in capitals, since its like that on the URL
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Double quotes (") should be single quotes ('), as per WP:MOS guidelines
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * TV by the Numbers is published by Zap2it
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref. 13 should be regular quotes rather than curly quotes
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Ref. 12 has WP:DASH problems
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Is "Screencrave" a high-quality source?
 * It has and editorial staff and I've used it for various other articles (mostly these season 8 ones) that have passed GA. If this was going for FAN, probably not, but for GA, it should be good enough.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Some references have publishers, some don't. Please add to all of them, or remove from all of them
 * Fixed.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)


 * External links
 * No problems

This article is in good shape, and will be put on hold for the minor issues above. Cheers, TBrandley 17:56, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Awesome! Thanks for the quick review.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:49, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Your welcome. Article appears good. Pass. Well done! TBrandley 18:51, 3 September 2012 (UTC)