Talk:Lou Spence/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Catrìona (talk · contribs) 21:42, 27 September 2018 (UTC)

I'll take this review; more comments to follow shortly. Catrìona (talk) 21:42, 27 September 2018 (UTC)


 * Cresswell found that "thanks to Lou Spence", the squadron "was led perfectly in all the jobs it did" Who stated that? It's not clear if it was Cresswell or the author of the book.
 * If it was the author of the book I'd attribute it but happy to change to "Cresswell commented" to clarify.
 * Going Solo: The Royal Australian Air Force 1946–1971 is a broken link
 * Tks, will fix.
 * I would make the picture of the dog a bit smaller
 * Okay, will take a look.

Other than that, it's a quick pass, since the article obviously meets the GA criteria. Catrìona (talk) 23:46, 27 September 2018 (UTC)


 * Thank you very much for taking the time to review, Catriona. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 00:53, 28 September 2018 (UTC)