Talk:Louie Caporusso/GA1

GA Review
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While there's not much about the guy listed, he's still in college, so there will be more as time goes on. Overall the article is good, however I found a few issues:
 * There's a stray ]] in the infobox. Not sure where it is or how to get rid of it, but it needs fixing.
 * I don't see it.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 22:33, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
 * You sure all sources are exhausted? At 3.6kb of prose there's not much, a general expansion would be cool if possible, speially if it's stuff besides stats and awards, which is most of the article.
 * This is a college hockey player. This is about all I have access to.  If he becomes an NHL player, as would be a logical expectation, the current text will serve as abundant background.  He still is only a sophomore in college.  This is a pretty robust article for a sophomore in college.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 22:35, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
 * "During the first half of the season, he led the nation in goals scored, but he played a different scoring role during the final nine regular season games as the team went 8–1 and he scored two goals and posted 14 assists." As it stands this sentence is a run-on.
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 22:40, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

I'll put this on hold and will pass when the issues are handled. Wizardman 19:36, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I have seen this review and will start responding after the weekend. I am expanding Cato June and hope to complete the expansion in time to get a WP:DYK.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 17:46, 25 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Everything looks good now. As for the ]] int he infobox that's gone, I don't know why I was seeing it. I'll pass this article now. Wizardman  23:46, 26 July 2009 (UTC)