Talk:Louis A. Gottschalk

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded: Espresso Addict 09:18, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Template:Infobox Scientist should be added
 * Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
 * Basic biographical information required, including precise date and place of birth, positions held (with dates)
 * Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * After expansion, article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
 * One sentence paragraphs should be amalgamated
 * Information on research should be expanded and references required
 * Information on writings should be expanded; a list of works would be useful
 * References should be expanded and preferably converted to inline format with reference list (not external links)
 * External link present which could be used to expand article