Talk:Louis I of Hungary/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 22:15, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Ok, I'll be giving this one a review over the next few days. Miyagawa (talk) 22:15, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for starting the review. I think this is an amazing article and I believe it really deserves this nomination. Also, Hungarian history is awesome. --Simboyd (talk) 22:27, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

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Discussion

 * General
 * Sorry about the delay with this review - I've completed a few basic checks and found that there are quite a few duplicated wikilinks within the document. The easiest way to find these is to use User:Ucucha/duplinks.
 * You also need to double check the citations in the article to correct the order in which they appear (as some of them don't appear numerically).


 * Childhood and youth
 * "often delivered him on his shoulders" - can you clarify this? Are you referring to him getting rides on a knights shoulders? It is just that the him on his part lends confusion as to which one you're referring to.
 * To be honest, I took no part in writing this article and I'm not sure what is meant by that. It probably refers to the fact that the knight carried Luis on his shoulders.


 * "but he did not administer his province" perhaps "but he did not administer the province" instead?
 * I'll fix it.


 * More to come. Miyagawa (talk) 21:05, 13 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry for being so useless for all this time. I didn't really know all of this was my responsibility. Also, could you please clarify what you mean by "double-checking the citations for their order"? Are you saying they should be put in an incremental manner like this and not like this? --Simboyd (talk) 21:34, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 * That's right. Miyagawa (talk) 18:06, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
 * There, I think I rearranged all of them where it was necessary. --Simboyd (talk) 21:34, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

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