Talk:Louise McKinney/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 19:08, 21 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this one. --Vacant0 (talk) 19:08, 21 August 2022 (UTC)


 * On hold until these issues get fixed. Vacant0 (talk) 20:28, 21 August 2022 (UTC)
 * @Vacant0: I've done all of these suggestions, except for splitting the web references into their own section. I'm not exactly sure how to go about doing that -- are there any articles that can be used as an example? &mdash; Ingenuity (talk &bull; contribs) 01:29, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
 * @Ingenuity At any rate, this is not one of the GA criteria and shouldn't be required to pass the GAN. -- asilvering (talk) 05:46, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
 * It's optional, and as the user above said, it's not a part of criteria (it's mentioned in MOS:FNNR). I'll promote this to GA. Vacant0 (talk) 10:12, 22 August 2022 (UTC)

General

 * Infobox: occupation parameter "Women's rights activist and politician" → " Women's rights activist · politician


 * Lede: née Crummy → Crummy


 * Add the fact that she supported eugenics and stricter immigration laws.


 * Political career: Famous Five is first mentioned here so it should be wiki-linked. Unlink the one in the "Persons Case".


 * Categories: Remove "Canadian feminists", and two human rights activist categories. Feminism is not backed up by sources in the article, add "Canadian women's rights activists" instead, a more broad term that is correct and accepted by sources.

Images

 * Add alt text.


 * Properly licensed, no objections to this.