Talk:Louise Zarmati

Peer review
Hello!

Your group has done a job at finding publications from your archeologist and have a good outline of what you would like to talk about. I think that once you get the Education and Career sections filled out with multiple sources I think it will be a well rounded article. You might consider adding an Early life section depending if you can find any information on that topic of your biography.

Buslak (talk) 00:21, 2 February 2019 (UTC)Kassidy B.

Emilyrath Peer Review
Good job on the one sentence preview of who Zarmati is at the beginning! Your headings are good, if you find stuff on her early life you could make the "Education" section into "Early Life and Education" and add it there or something like that if you feel like you don't have enough information to do separate sections for both. Your current last sentence under Career says that a dig "included children age 5-14." You might want to elaborate a bit because I was not sure if that meant kids were helping dig or getting dug up. Definitely need to add some sources everywhere and I would check if the news article for the Kerry Lodge dig is the kind of source Prof Marwick is looking for. Overall well written and good, concise information! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emilyrath (talk • contribs) 04:21, 2 February 2019 (UTC)