Talk:Love, Loss, and What I Wore

Edit conflict
Sorry about the edit conflict. Please check to make sure that I did not lose any of your changes. I did some reorganization and proofreading. I simplified the infobox, but I am no expert on infoboxes for non-musical plays. Hope that helps! -- Ssilvers (talk) 15:48, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Music stands
Hi. The plot should not contain production information like the info about the music stands. Other productions might use electronic screens, or the actresses might be "off book". That is why I put the music stands above in the history section. The black clothing could be mentioned though, as it seems to be part of the script. I don't know about the theatre project, but in the musicals project, we do not put any sort of meta-production type into in the plot section at all. -- Ssilvers (talk) 23:13, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Updated comments
I was asked to review this article. Here are my current comments: On the whole, I would call this a good C-class article, but not quite a B-class article, due to the remaining background and plot problems. -- Ssilvers (talk) 19:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * The article now has the beginnings of a background/genesis section (called "Development" here), but it is perfunctory and requires considerable expansion. It should describe how the work's inspiration and the process of how it came to be written, developed, cast and produced (see "summing up" above).  It should also briefly give some background on the creators that is relevant to explaining why they decided to do this project and how it relates to their body of work.  For an excellent example of this, see Carousel (musical).  I agree with Jezhotwells that finding additional interviews or articles about the piece should be useful in writing this.
 * [later]: Some progress has been made, but it is so vague that I had to leave several hidden comments.  This is at least a start.  -- Ssilvers (talk) 16:17, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * There has been some progress in the Themes section, which is good.
 * I see that a section has been added with a long list of names. This could be put in a separate list article, but it should not be here.  This article should name the original cast and mention the original cast of each major production in the production section.  It could also name a handful of the most notable people who have appeared as replacements in major productions, or who have appeared in the piece multiple times.  Done.
 * It still does not have a plot description based on the script which is, IMO, a threshold requirement for any GA about a play or musical. As "summing up" mentions above, there should also be information about all five characters.
 * The Lead section still does not give an overview of all the information in (or that should be in) the article per WP:LEAD


 * Per WP:SUMMARYSTYLE, I created a new article: Cast lists for Love, Loss, and What I Wore. Then I moved the detail cast list for the Off-Broadway production there and left summary information in this article, together with a cross-reference.  I think it is much better, but if you hate it, you can revert.  My italics in the article title doesn't seem to work well.  Do you know how to fix it?  All the best,  -- Ssilvers (talk) 17:14, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I'd ask at either the help desk or WP:FLC.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:28, 20 August 2011 (UTC)
 * At FL they have a lot of list List of awards for Movie X . See what those articles do.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 23:08, 20 August 2011 (UTC)